That was very well-written; most joke stories aren't. You're a very good writer. ^-^ The song was really funny...I wish you'd made it longer! Oh, the characterization was great, too. All around good story! :P

well it is interesting i sapose. so far pretty good.

-chaos from the knight of doom.

omg, this is an amazing idea! I expect a lot out of this idea, man! Update soon!

four stars! *applause* See, I can't write duel sequences... ^.^; (And now I know to Feverishly look for my notebook)

you really made my day
it was about time someone wrote a fic in which chazz actually won a duel against jaden
keep it up, dear!