Reviews for Ten Never Happeneds’ of Ace Lightning

Reviews For: Ten Never Happeneds’ of Ace Lightning

Ashley 2007-07-07 ch 9, anon.	abuseNeat. I like it. (Oh, big surprise, I like anything Sparx :)) Not really much more I have time to say right now but.. yeah I like it.
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-07-04 ch 9,	abuseThis was lovely to wake up to!
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-03-09 ch 8,	abuseOMG, this is just. So. Damn. Perfect!! I'm melting into a puddle of squee over here!! Tone witty and lighthearted and absolutely right for the crossover and the characters, lovely lovely characterisation and banter, references to the Excess world that really emphasise the setting--all so much squee! "It’s a far enough bound for Maki to make a size comparison and realise that, if not Rio, then Nanvel, at least, has certainly met her match. She thinks back to the videos of the first battle. The shards of metal that obscured the screen and the blue shards of light bursting from one weapon after another." Boobage commentary and a great descriptive sentence all at once! I so loved this! :D "Another girl’s weaponry is serious stuff.’" Ohh, yeah. :D I just wish Sparx had met up with Maya--they'd so get along together! No underwear thieves--but an exciting mission. ^_^ Squee! (Again. :P) This was great!
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-03-09 ch 7,	abuseE, loverly ficness. ^_^ You've done a lot with the setting; it really intrigued me. I was so curious! The characters go well with it; I love that you use the ones you chose (Wayne! Heather! Squeeness!) and they seem to fit so well into this story. I really liked Random's line about Heather's nicotine sticks. Very nice fic, very fascinating setting, great take on the characters. I like!
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-03-04 ch 6,	abuseSorry I waited so long to review. :) I don't know the canon at all, so I really have no clue what's going on. The...colours of the girls sound interesting, and I like Sam in this. I want to see her kick some crossover arse, though! :P
The Lightning Flash 2007-02-24 ch 4,	abuseThere's actually an upcoming episode of Skyland that's going to deal with how Sphere trainees view the Pirates as the evil ones. This was a really awesome take on that, and I hope the episode will be as good. ^^
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-02-24 ch 5,	abuseThis is lovely and sweet and has some really nice insights into Chuck. I'm all "aww" at the fact he remembered Mark, even though he's a hero in his own right--and I really like that he gets a hero's name anyway, because he so is. This is another crossover interaction I really wanted to see, and I'm so glad you put in this nice thoughtful piece that combines two lovely canons in a sweet and plausible fashion. Keep doing this! :P
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-02-24 ch 4,	abuseThis was just thrilling to read. A brilliant Sparx, a Sparx who could so well be doing this, fighting the same way she does in canon but that much more brutally because of the circumstances she's in and what she's chosen to believe in this world. She feeds off the other character well, a wonderful juicy conflict that's so intense, one short passage that manages to pack all that feeling and weight into a small space that feels so much stronger for it. I love this take on the characters, and I love Ammy! Beautiful work.
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-02-24 ch 3,	abusePoor, poor Rick. Seriously creepy! Great fic. Longer than the others, which was good--it's always nice to hear more from you! I like Trench Coat Guy. You make Yu-Gi-Oh canon sound really fascinating in this crossover, lots of great scary potential and interesting characters! Very well done.
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-02-24 ch 2,	abuseOMG. Pink! :P (Yeah, you know it's nearly four in the morning here. :P) I'm too blinded by the adorable pink-and-gold sparkle to properly review, but this is a great Mark trying to Deal With Things and a very IC reaction from Kat to Most Unconventional Circumstances. Squee for doing this crossover,
Blue-Inked Frost 2007-02-24 ch 1,	abuseLuverly! Heather-as-Slayer is such an incredibly nice mental image. I love heroic!Heather getting a chance to shine, and Buffy is one of those shows I think I like without ever having seen it, so double squee. :P Very nice!
The Lightning Flash 2007-02-24 ch 1,	abuseHeather, I assume? Cool stuff, though I'd hate to see anyone try to stake the Knights. ;) I can just imagine the look on Sparx' face if someone were to poke her chest with a piece of wood. . . . Actually, I really WANT to see that. :P

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