BRAVO, that was a novel in the making...please continue. I do have one request, please stop making Ronon into an ogre. I can't believe he would be that horrible in a relationship. Oh, and Give Dr. Zalenka some love.; )

This is so wonderful. Please update.

What an ominous chapter ending.

The action is very well-handled. I hope the Tauri do not remain their enemies. Seems like both sides have much to gain from one another. Angry, protective of Teyla John was great.

I love how you deepen the story into greater detail and more directions in the second chapter. Incredible job.

This is so creative and beautifully written. Your world building is incredible. I love John and Teyla's connection and the languages and literary references. The bit with the mirror at the beginning really foreshadows something dark and bloody.

This is absolutely wonderful! You've had my attention since the
the first sentence in chapter 1 and have not stopped! It so real!
I can not wait until your next chapter!

I continue to love this story. The richness of your descriptions and the intensity of all the characters relations. Well done.

i can never get enough of this fic, sweetie! Nicely done!

i like it

Yea, you’re updating again. Great chapter and several mysteries of what is to come. I can’t wait to read more.

Another amazing chapter. Can’t wait to read more with Ame who should be on the way soon, how things will be with Teyla’s great-great-great-ect.. grandfather in the city, and everything else. Update Soon!

I've always loved this portion of your story, possibly because of the sense of giving and connection by all the principles. Looking forward to the 2nd half of this chapter.

Exciting ending, though I am not quite sure what to make of it. Liked the reference to Cassandra; Teyla seeing the future, this should be interesting. Update Soon!

You are doing such a fantastic job at this...I never imagined you could make it better...I like the little extras that you've added..nice touches that compliment the flow of the story...I love this chapter, seeing how John again, did the unthinkable...I love when he goes back to Earth...that is so within character..and Ronon and Eylar...I loved those two as well...such a great irony and wouldn't that be something in the actual show to have Ronon fall for a Wraith...John already has...but Ronon should be interesting...thanks for all the hard work in doing this hon...nicely done! You know I love this fic! Camy