this is really neat, I don't think that Kyuubi's point of view is used enough, love the analogy to fleas! Makes you feel sort of bad for him...nicely done!

Well it was really, really cool... confusing though xD I don't know what the setting was, i'm guessing the night kyuubikun got sucked into naruto but i'm not sure. Lol,
It was still really awesome so don't get me wrong!
It was super duper descriptive and I love that!
Please write more!

whoa.really whoa. that was great

I really enjoyed this story. I especially liked sort of past and present contrast.(that was the best way I could put it. sorry)
Keep up the good work.
-Aqua