GOOD JOB! I loved it, every sentence of it! Eddy is a natural born leader, I always said!

The story is very well written, and the characters are not 2D like some characters are. The only thing I can see wrong is all the history and backstory. It was confusing to read at first, but after reading it again I've got it all down. Keep up the good work!

Oh, this is really good. I'll have to think about checking out this Event Horizon thing.

I like how Eddy's the leader. He's a natural-born leader I think.

Yo.Do you play FreeLancer? And This involves HomeWorld,dosen't it?Great Story by the way.