I fyou don't become a professional writer I will be shocked. GREAT JOB! Please continue ASAP.

YUIE-SA- I mean...CHAN!

I'm sure the reason Yuan isn't using his double-bladed thingie is cause it's like bigger than him. :D This story is fun, especially when I'm staying with my three-year-old cousin this week for Spring Break. (Incidentally, updates on MY story will be slow this week.)

I think you meant "planet" rather than "plant" in the last sentance; I'm ignoring the grammar errors in the little kids' speeches cause hello they're little kids. Other than that, very fun, very cure, and I'm waiting for more!

i would like to say i really liked it. there was only one problem, aselia is spelt iselia but you got it after a while so ^_^ keep going.

Omg! I absolutely love the kids! YAY!

*flails* I wanna know what happens! Update soon! *flails*

^_^ Glad you got this up! For some reason, I thought the part where Lloyd makes Kratos promise not to leave was just really cute. I still have a hard time picturing Kratos saying anyting in a little-kid voice though.

You slipped into present tense twice where you shouldn't have: where you're describing their outfits and in the battle with the wyvern. Also, you'll need to go back and capitalize Martel, Flamberge, and Chosen. You might want to capitalize "Seraph" but you don't technically have to. (I always do.) Word usage and stuff seems to be fine though. I liked it! Waiting for the next part. ^_^

that was slightly confusing but i get it now. Very interesting plot so far and i cant wait to rean more.

LLOYDIE! You're not gonna kill Lloydie, are ya-?! Wait...you just said he's going to be his silly self...oh, so he'll be safe. Whew. ANyway, the idea of all of them chibi-fied is adorable! I can't wait to read more!

Nice beginning! Though there were some problems with present and past-tense(forgive me I'm a grammar fanatic of the second order) grammar-wise you did pretty well. I like your idea for this fic, it's bound to be a lot of fun. :D

Hoping that you update soon,

Heart of Sorrow

What? What! I- what? I'm very confused! I hope this gets explained SOON! I mean, rapidamente, ok!?

WAH! Interesting! i wanna know what happens! Update soon!

Yay, you're posting it here! I like the prologue (of course I already know a little bit of what happens ;)). Noishe the fish...heheh...someone get him in the water before something tragic happens!

Umm...Oh! I think it's Derris-Kharlan (with the dash), but other than that nothing majorly wrong gramatically.

LOL I like this idea! I almost feel sorry for Kratos. I hope that you're able to continue this story.

Umm...I don't know if the review I posted first was sent so here it is again:
Yay! A new story! I have to say that this is a unique storyline, I've never read anything like it. You're really good at describing what goes on in the story and use nice descriptive sentences! So lemme get this straight, all the main characters of Symphonia have become toddlers?! Wow, I never saw that one coming! I hope that they become themselves soon...but 10 year old Kratos must look pretty cute! XD Anyways, please continue this story and keep up the good work!