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invis
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Aw! I love how Pam was almost responsible for Jim's death by coercing him to try a different sandwich. Granted, it's not like she forced him to make that *particular* sandwich, or to eat it without any beverage to wash it down, but knowing Pam, she feels horribly guilty for not believing Jim when he said ham sandwiches were all that stood between him and an untimely death. At least he would've gotten to die in her arms, though, right? ;)

Great story.
Loony Lady Lola
2007-03-21 . chapter 1
You spelled it right! WOOT FOR YOU! Loved the story!
Chipotle
2007-03-04 . chapter 1
This was an awesome fic! The PB & J was cute. Good job!
Aracalien
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
V. funny and sweet. I definitly think you should write some more office fics.
"I would never leave you alone with Dwight" Love it ;)
Alex Wert
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
Ha! Kevin! I know it was cartoony of him, but still funny.
enjoiturbulence
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
good stuff, here. truly, i'd start writing some non-fan-fiction, cause you've got a good voice, here. respect.
bredalot
2007-02-23 . chapter 1
This is really well done. I hate mooning!fics, in general, but mooning!Jim is perfectly canon, and here, perfectly done. The choking was a bit...unexpected? Odd? I don't know. It was weird, but perhaps appropriate, especially since you included the line "the irony of that is not lost on him". I also love the line, "He wants to want things" - perfect.

There are a few typos, but no spelling mistakes (including Chili's!), so I'm ok with that. Besides, I can't type anything without having to delete half the words. :P Overall, I really like it.
literaryfreak
2007-02-23 . chapter 1
PB & J? That's so damn awesome. Just like your fic. Honestly, I'm adding you to my favorites so please write more Office fics. You're already a freakin pro at it. I love the "he wants to want things" line.
EmilyHalpert
2007-02-23 . chapter 1
no y in chili's good job.
haha, i love peanut butter and jelly. not a fan of jam in that way. but it was a cute story
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