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Majin Hentai X
2009-11-20 . chapter 38
Emma there is only one way out of this corner to make this story move forward. Thriller Bark do it Emma just read the chapters watch the anime Thriller bark you can make a michael Jackson joke just do it I dare you Emma Thriller bark come on join the rest of the community move forward.
kikyokyoyahibari
2009-11-20 . chapter 38
So there's nothing new chasing after them in the next
omaomae
2009-11-20 . chapter 38
update nice story soon please! wats the new arc i wanna no!
AshK
2009-11-20 . chapter 38
good work on this update as always! Keep them coming.
AshK
2009-11-16 . chapter 37
Good work on this update as always!
Majin Hentai X
2009-11-16 . chapter 37
This is decent but way too short Emma-chan. I mean come on you have kept this fic in hiatus for months and this is what we get not saying its bad its readable and logical just way to short.

Please don't half ass the Kenpachi fight he is violent and bloody there needs to be heavy violence in the next chapter uninterrupted. Before you even begin to write this chapter watch the Kenpachi vs Ichigo fight and read the manga chapters which have been made in the U.S for two years now. Then re-watch several of Zoro's non-filler fights especially Zoro vs Kaku and Zoro vs Ryuma ys from the Thriller Bark arc.

Emma I've noticed your not really that good at writing sword fights so maybe ask for some help and finally spell and grammar check then have some one proof read it for you before posting okay Emma-chan this fic has alot of potential you have made mistakes but you can fix it as you move on your a good author Emma just put some more passion into the writing. The reason Manga is so good is because the authors put their souls into the works put your soul into this story.

This is MHX signing off Good night and Thank you for not supporting Yaoi.
AAA ASRA AAA
2009-11-16 . chapter 37
What's white zoro's eye color? White? Red? Blue?
albinoblackswan
2009-11-16 . chapter 37
Swet! Wado Ichimonji! Awesome!
That is a twist.
BlackxValentine
2009-11-16 . chapter 37
So cool!!

I love the way his sword split into three! xP
Ultimate-Zelda-fan
2009-11-15 . chapter 37
Well that's certainly unusual.
kikyokyoyahibari
2009-11-15 . chapter 37
Finally you updated. Good chapter and does Zoro's white doppleganger have a name?
BlackxValentine
2009-11-13 . chapter 36
Oh man this is so good. I love how you combine my two favorite animes!
BlackxValentine
2009-11-13 . chapter 32
Poor Renji getting beat up be Zoro...glad he's here though cause I love Renji!

He's my fav Bleach character!!

love this story!
real life sucks
2009-10-20 . chapter 12
I love Rainbow! It's so funny how she snaps and has like a split personality thing going on
albinoblackswan
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
Sweet!

Kuina-the-guy better be awesome.
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