Reviews for Bleached Marimo

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Alanna-twins 2008-07-24 ch 1,	abuseZorba: Ok, so I was at first gonna review on the 23rd chapter, but then I deciden to write here instead. I've read... let's see... 4 chapters, a long while ago. And I'm gonna put this in my cellphone and reread it, and read all the chapters that you've written this far. So I'm probably gonna review on the story later on. In a couple of weeks or so^^ But what I remember, I liked it^^
ANIME FREAK 2008-07-01 ch 23, anon.	abuseOMG! DON'T STOP! IT'S SUMMER NOW SO YOU CAN MAKE THE CHAPTERS FASTER, RIGHT? YOU ROCK! I LUV YOU, AND YET I HATE YOU FOR BEING ABLE TO WRITE BETTER AND MORE SUSPENSEFULLY THAN ME! KEEP WRITTING!! i LIKED THE ACE VENTURA JOKE AND THE "MAGICAL PANTS"! I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF! (PARDON MY FRENCH...)
Lady Dragon010 2008-06-30 ch 23,	abuseThis is Aqua Girl speaking i'm sorry I havent revewed until now but for the last 4 weeks I was getting ready for a 5 day camp and i finly got home, then it took me 2 howers just to find this fic. but anyways this is asome I love it please continue.(Aqua girl)
UsopppLover4Ever 2008-06-28 ch 12,	abuseAlso as soon as I read about Cloudy I knew she was based off of osaka! Also what's up w/ Sanji's pants!!?! They creep me out...shivers
UsopppLover4Ever 2008-06-28 ch 6,	abuseOMG the thought...the very IDEA that Usopp is a Quincy is...wow...In my own world I was dying and was given the choice of being a simple member of the Soul Society or being a Soul Reaper...and I chose Soul Reaper. So now I'm the captain of special ops squad 6(wanted 13 but there already is 1 so...).Also my "brother" is a regular Whole and the other is a Hollow...
Amaya Zorifuki 2008-06-16 ch 23,	abuseYay! Hana-kun! He's my absolute favorite character, and I'm glad to hear that he'll be back soon. The original characters are really fun and interesting. erm, that name of Achika's Zanpakuto is a sailor moon thing, right. (I haven't watched that series in years so I could be wrong.) In any case, really good.
FrescaPower 2008-06-16 ch 23,	abuseLet's see...Achika's Zanpakuto means 'Rabbit Moon' I think... is it something to do with CLAMP? The Zanpakuto of the guy who fought Franky ('Elekibull') is the Japanese name for the Pokemon 'Electivire' (I looked it up on Wikipedia!) Lincoln's probably has something to do with Bulbasaur... Nice chapter, by the way. -FrescaPower
GammaTron 2008-06-15 ch 23,	abuseThe Shinigami's Zanpakuto, Elekibull, sounds more like Eleckid, Electabuzz, or Elecvire, and its flashy attack Thunderbolt... You got it from Pokemon. The other Zanpakuto is from either Sailor Moon or Django from the Syrup Village.
AshK 2008-06-13 ch 23,	abuseGood work on this update as always! Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK
anonymous 2008-06-13 ch 23, anon.	abuseAchika's got the same name as Serena (Sailor Moon) in Japan! And it turns into chakram, sort of like her tiara. The only thing I got about the other one is that it sounds like the evolution of Electabuzz, especially with the electric attacks.
one piece fanatic 2008-06-12 ch 23, anon.	abuseI have an idea, he is the younger brother of Kaku of the Cp9, Sasu. He died do to an attack by pirates that caused his brother to join the government. He is a bruiser and fighting expert, meaning he joined eleventh division and is currently an eighth seat. His zanpakuto's name is Perissoda and the call for it is charge. In released form it takes the form of a rhino head which extends to ram his opponent from long distance. THe hidden bankai, if he ever reaches it is basically a giant rhino with dozens of cannons on it. hope you can use him, if not, well iit is your story. Go Strawhats.
GreyMonkey 2008-06-12 ch 23,	abuseinteresting fights, but they seemed a little rushed. They didn't last more then a few hits on either side. You shouldn't be afraid to make the chapters longer and go into more detail with the fights. The product will be worth it if the update speed is slower Zori is going to get the face-reconstruction effect from Sanji's kicks right? After this, have Yumichka constantly come up to him talking about their shared beauty. That would piss him off. I noticed that Ussop's opponet was a vauge reference to Kurama from Yu-Yu-Hakusho with the red hair and rose wip. Was that intentional or by chance? update soon
XiaBubbleQueen 2008-06-12 ch 23,	abuseYay! I love Hanataro!! hugs Hanataro I get the joke for Achika's Zanpakuto! Tsuki no Uasagi...Rabbit of the Moon...Salor Moon, right? Cuz in the Japanese verson, her name was Usagi, which means rabbit!! Nice...update soon!
Santoryuu-Zoro 2008-06-12 ch 23,	abuseI think that Zoro's Zanpakuto should have the same name as what they are. They just have such awesome names ^_^ You could work on the grammar, but the story is still good. When you said Sanji's pants turned into his "magical" pants, I just cracked up. It just sounded pretty funny XD So is Zoro gonna have any hollow trouble? And here's a Shinigami: Ziao Shouchi Red hair, Zanpakuto: Bite// Koronaru His katana can, along with cutting, can actually bite the opponent, and it's teeth can bite through rock. Is that what you wanted?
Daisuke Kazamatsuri 2008-06-02 ch 22,	abuseI love this story so far. The first (that I've seen) that crosses these two! Though you might want to go back and at least correct the easy spelling errors (reread before posting, it helps with the boasting!). Hope to see more soon! ^^

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