 Polish 2008-03-11 . chapter 1*Giggles* that was cute! and yes your face really can freeze in a certain way. I should now, it was so cold one day and I had to wait for the bus and everything, that wind made my face start to hurt, and in time I swear I couldnt move it! ^^ this was a very good ficlet, I loved it! |
 Mad Mary Kidd 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Wow, I never thought of doing it like that... I loved your characterisation of Kadaj, really well done. Sequel? What happens next? =3
~MMK |
 lotus head 2007-04-09 . chapter 1Ooh, that was so wonderful. *faves* I love how things are happening but it's still so insightful and poetic. (did that make sense? XO) And I love the plot~ Kadaj calling out for Cloud= brilliance. And the silliness. Cool. Yeah. Stuff. ._.~ |
 anon 2007-03-05 . chapter 1 This was different...I never read anything like this before. Very original idea*thumbs up* I'd love to read more! But I guess this is just a one-shot. Well, good job on this! |
 SilverEyeZ 2007-02-24 . chapter 1 oh, that was weird but in a good way. it gave me chills...But Kadaj being naked made me giggle a bit. What a frustrating end, I wanted to know how his face froze. /But very strange but good story! |
 x.cherry.pink.x 2007-02-23 . chapter 1It was pretty good. What was his face frozen like? |