Glad that Rose got to be a Time Lord :) It was an interesting, but short story.

Yay happy ending! going straight to the sequal.

Thank you for putting Time LORD. Not Time LADY. I thank you once aagin awesome story. Im off to read the sequel! Harah! xD

Very good, but as you said, rushed. Description is needed and please do write a sequel.

I could BETA for you :)

OMG!

YOU LEFT IT THERE!

GAAH..

it's great though!

That cannot be the end! What will the Doctor say to Rose? How will Rose tell him that she is a Time Lady? Please post more soon.

I could just see in my mind's eye the Doctor skidding down the corridors to meet Rose. He he...

Although, you never mentioned anything about what the Doctor thought about Rose becoming a Timelady...feels like you missed a huge chunk.

Good story though! Loved every minute! Can't wait for the sequel! ;)

interesting final line... could have loads of meanings. anyway, i look forward to seeing a sequel.

Very good! I would make the chapters longer though! I would also describe her feelings more! But tis good! Bravissimo.

Arriverderci

I'm sorry, but I have to be picky with this chapter. It's what i do. Don't take offence to it, I just like pointing out things :D

You said Lithe's TARDIS was a police box...but why? TARDIS's usually appear in a shape that matches their surroundings. The only exception with the Doctor is that his chameleon circuit broke when it was digused as one. So unless by absolute coincidence Lithe's TARDIS broke at the exact same time period and she never bothered to get it fixed it just doesn't fit.

Secondly, I noticed you reffered to Timelords as bendy or flexible, and as much as i'd like to agree with you (I love the name Lithe too...) the evidence says that Timelords were actually a very pompus and pig headed race. if you've seen a bit of Old Who I bet you know what i mean. ;)

Grammer was a bit better, but you missed a week! Oh well, I'm not writing it and I know you know what you are doing so I'll leave you alone :)

Take your time updating...work on it a bit...I'm mostly saying this because I don't want it to end!

Wow, this is really great, I love the thought of Rose becoming a Time Lord, or Time Lady, depending on who you talk to. This story is really good! Please update soon! And I too would want to get back to David Tennant in a hurry!

ooh that would be cool to have the doctors pov!

thanks for answering the question!

this was a very good

you spelled right, and that's exactly what i mean. i know he was with a time lady at one point who regenerated (i have a friend who's a long-term fan; me, i just know 9 & 10), but i don't know how he reacted... but with rose... ooh. i can't wait till rose gets back home and catches up to the doctor. how is she going to do that anyway? update soon!

oh thats really good! but how can you just end it with five chapters? It needs to be long! Please update soon