squeel oh that was such a good read ive gone all giggley but if i may say i wish it was longer lol but oh well thats wat an over active imaginations for -_^ thanks so much for the read

aw... so sweett !!

Its Laharl but it isnit. o.O Still I liked it. :3

i love it! so cute!
WAH!

lol nicely done fluffy and all

Very short, but very sweet! Kind of like taking a little bite of the perfect candy. ^^ Very enjoyable! To improve it, try to add more detail to make it longer. Like, instead of just jumping locations, describe what happens while their headed there, etc.. You did a great job, and I'm anxious for you to write more!

Um...
NICE...
Cool!
But then...
Can Lahari really be that...
well you know...
Not kinda ...
um.
romantic...
But then...
The story is really
Really
Really super cool
LOVE IT!

Strange that, in a way, I could actually see Laharl doing something like this.

Nice!

Oh, a recent fanfic and the first Disgaea one I ever read. :) I like how you kept them in character for the most part. The end seemed somehow rushed or abrupt. ^^; Nice job though. :D

Simple and short, but nice and sweet~ *nod nod*

Short but sweet. I love it!

E! That was so good! I loved it! ^^