|Reviews for I Wish It Was Me|
| demorabella 6/30/07 . chapter 2
*bawls eyes out and gets shocked from the keyboard* Not again!
Anyway, I love it. I'm reminded quite a bit of "I'm Not That Girl" from "Wicked" which makes it all the more heartbreaking.
Specifically the end of the song:
"Don't wish. Don't start.
Wishing only wounds the heart.
I wasn't born for the rose and pearl.
There's a girl I know.
He loves her so.
I'm not that girl."
Awesome song, but not nearly as awesome as this fic.
| i.have.an.idea 2/27/07 . chapter 2
The way you got in their heads, and the smooth, gentle flow you set her is great.
The story on the first page, about Elliot just knowing she was having a rough time, and showing up and informing her he'd be staying with her, and holding her was simply beautiful.
I love how you seemed to capture their desire so well with your words. I also like how you forged a connection between them, deeper than some people bother to write about.
And that's quite a conundrum they're in, unable to change things... I liked the honesty this somehow exudes, even though it offers no hope for things to be different.
Good writing. I was pretty shocked by how much i like the first chapter. I expect this is probably finished, but I look forward to more of your writing in stories to come...
| JESSting123 2/27/07 . chapter 2
OMG! U r the best! I luv this! I wish u would make this an on-going! Pretty pretty please with chocolate covered Elliot on top? Well, thnk bout it!
| bloodymary2 2/27/07 . chapter 2
Great look inside their minds, sweet the reasons they hold back and good finish line...
"I just wish..."
Sigh, very good!
| onetreefan 2/27/07 . chapter 2
OOH! Good stuff. Loved seeing El's feelings! :D
| castlelove1221 2/27/07 . chapter 2
awesome! update again soon please! :)
| LivNel4ever 2/26/07 . chapter 2
omg this is really good. you have to keep going!
| castlelove1221 2/24/07 . chapter 1
that was great...you should definately continue with it! can't wait to read what you write next!
| KatieKat1690 2/23/07 . chapter 1
aww, this was really good! I loved it! I think you shoud definetly write more to this! Great job!
| onetreefan 2/23/07 . chapter 1
Wow... Good stuff. :D