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Taeniaea
2009-08-28 . chapter 7
Cool Story
TheDon1023
2008-03-13 . chapter 7
interesting story and i think he should be able to use magic by drawing from the earth like FF8. anyways until next time

-The Don

P.S. i was kinda hoping for a Naru/Ino pairing since any good ones are hella rare and Naru/Hina pairings are freakin everywhere but whatever.
Shinku Ryuuga
2008-03-11 . chapter 7
I wonder what "aspects" Naruto will "unlock of the Kyozuka bloodline"... Oh well. I think that Shino should open up just a leetle(did that on purpose) more, but I'm just suggesting that.
imgonnadie
2008-03-10 . chapter 7
Excellent chapter.
C SM
2008-03-10 . chapter 7
just take your time man... to lazy to log in

-Chris ShadowMoon
fojee
2008-03-09 . chapter 6
Stick to the jutsus.

Update!
Morgan Daratrazanoff
2008-01-02 . chapter 6
Great story! Update soon!!
ragnarok the 1st
2007-12-28 . chapter 6
i say go with the ff8 magic system
JustWriter2
2007-11-17 . chapter 6
NO MAGIC! Stick to the jutsu(it's like sheep, plural and singular). I'm not sure about a NaruIno pairing. I haven't seen one that works yet. I've seen a KankuroTenTen pairing that works, a KonohamaruHanabi pairing that works, and even an extremely effective ItachiSakura pairing that works... All that I'm saying is that I haven't seen an effective NarutoIno pairing before. If you think that you can make it believable then go ahead.


-JW`chan ^-^
JustWriter2
2007-11-17 . chapter 3
I'm really partial to the NaruHina pairing. I don't like the fact that the creator is just tossing her aside in favor of Sakura.


-JW`chan ^-^
shankstar89
2007-11-09 . chapter 6
great story
ApocSM
2007-11-02 . chapter 6
Love the story, update soon!
Havock
2007-10-15 . chapter 6
needs an update
Kammari
2007-09-25 . chapter 6
great story and you should go with 6 magic system and with tidus and rest you should have him learn the limit breaks and other specialty techniques
imgonnadie
2007-08-11 . chapter 6
Excellent story so far. Please do continue to writel I now eagerly await your next chapter.

If you include magic for Naruto I think that you would be better going with the magic system of FF6. It was a better system overall.

For the Ship for Naruto I think that Ino would word as to the fact that they will be around each other a lot now.
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