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Shaddow the Ultimate Life Form
2009-05-30 . chapter 3
Lawl please contiue i love it and please dont end it >.<
The idea alchemist ninja demon
2008-07-08 . chapter 3
cool keep the story rollin'
Katsura Elric
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Me:NO!Don't die! and your ending is not emo is dramatic! Julie:The horror!nice! Me:Hey I was about to say that!grr Julie:Ah!Help! Me:See you in the next chapter bye Ayumi!-chases Julie-
InuyashaLuver1224
2007-12-21 . chapter 3
nanowrimo?? Wazzat?
InuyashaLuver1224
2007-12-21 . chapter 2
cute!!
InuyashaLuver1224
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
That was a dandy!
agent000
2007-12-15 . chapter 3
Lol! You're an idiot, as usual, and Eli doesn't sound far behind you, which is sad, considering that she seems to be the brains in this fic, lol. Took me awhile to get around to reading this one, but it was certainly amusing. Perhaps you could enlighten us lovely readers as to why Ed and Roy can see the insane ghosts of yourselves? Hehe...might be good to know. ;)

Anyway, update something or other soon, and I'll sit back and dread, uh, I mean, look forward to it! *fake grins* See you soon!
Elia LeFae
2007-12-14 . chapter 3
I love this story and i hope you will write more of it in the feuture(cant spell XD) Some things i would like you to fix are some of the punctuation and maybe not so many spaces between each block of text. So write more and hope to hear more.
Asj Johnson
2007-12-08 . chapter 3
Eh? Aren't those two of the characters in the fic I just finished reading?
Huh...
Pwahahaha
2007-11-29 . chapter 3
Yay, I'm reviewing! ^_^ This story is really funny! UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!

I wonder if ghosts exist in real life...
SohmaElric91
2007-11-23 . chapter 3
wow Ayumi, good fic so far! You're an amazing writer! I love all your fics! (well, the few that I've read). Keep 'em coming girl! And no worries, you can keep Ed. He's nice and all but... I'm more of an Al girl myself (even though he's not at the top of my bishi list *grin*). You go girl!

~SohmaElric91
Chibi-Elric-Chan
2007-11-08 . chapter 3
Thats really funny. I like these stories but they are way too many of them so its good you made your own little twist. I like this one so far.
ifyouloveme2
2007-11-08 . chapter 3
Teehee! Update...NOW!

That was a great story I loved it to DEATH!
(Sorry no pun intended...at first)
SapphireElric
2007-11-08 . chapter 3
rofl, this chapter is so funny! I love their reactions to the ghosts! Keep up the brilliant work!
UnbornHope
2007-11-08 . chapter 3
o very nice. bt i didnt expect both ed and roy to run from the room wetting there pants and crying for (al or riza) it makes you wonder if this is a humorous thing mabob or serious cuz its hard to tell with the death and then the screaming girly-boys. oh well please continue. oh and i know alot of other peoples have asked but uh whatsNanowrimo... pwease
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