 GeneralCuster 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Wow. This was just amazing. I loved it!
I got a little confused when you called it a swastika. Is Neji a Nazi? I'm not quite sure what the Buddhist name for the symbol is but I do know that in Japan they use the symbol to designate temples on road maps. |
 winterkaguya 2008-03-02 . chapter 1loved the story!! and very original i might say...i like how hinata finally realised her error and tried to amend them and it was naughty of naruto...but then again, i guess he had to do it or else hinata would regret the rest of her life...but their past life interest me though...i wonder what happened to hinata and neji previously??
anyways, great job! |
 Little Mouse Chan 2007-11-30 . chapter 1O_O Oh wow. That was... amazing. Like, utterly amazing. Sounds so complex and confusing to have to write out as well, but you did such a good job! That idea of the whole past life thingy is a really really cool one! And the whole tone of the story was created very well, not to mention I also love your idea of a modern Naruto x3 Being an artist too seems to fit him, i could picture Naruto like that so easily, it was amazing xD
This was such and interesting fanfic to read, and deffinitely held my attention while reading, (was supposed to go and help clean 15 minutes ago but instead had to finish reading xD). Good job, loads of kudohs to you! Thanks for the very enjoyable read! |
 Folle 2007-10-17 . chapter 1Very interesting idea, and well-executed to boot. I'm impressed. |
 After The Fray 2007-09-04 . chapter 1Great piece of work - the emotions really shone through and connected with me. |
 PaperCutVictim 2007-07-14 . chapter 1I admit that I found myself a bit lost at a few points, but once I managed to figure out the flow of the story, I was able to enjoy it a lot more.
Fantastic work, I could actually feel a little pang in my chest at a few points. :\ I'm glad you stuck with this instead of making a "sillier, shorter, sweeter one-shot", cuz while I'm a sucker myself for cute Neji/Hina works too, ultimately, this had the bigger impact.
Can't really fault it. Kudos to you. ^^ |
 Kira 2007-06-30 . chapter 1 Wow.. this fic was probably the most original thing I've read.. without having it go random! on me. lol. I'm really glad that you did finish it in the end. I loved the plot line and all the feelings and emotions you described. :) |
 alyuchiha913 2007-05-13 . chapter 1O...M...G...WOW...That was...wow...that was so AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY LOVE IT! It was awesome! You did an amazing job! I LOVED IT! I llove how it was so...i dunno...i can't describe it...it was so emotional when she rejected neji...and then...it was so sweet when they got together in the end...i'm a sucker for things like that!! It actually left me wanting more...i think you should continue it..or make a sequel or something...it's too deep to leave it as just a one-shot...You did an awesome job...even with the flashbacks and stuff...they fit in so well...at just the right moments...loved it! I'm gonna go add this to my favourites now...it was that awesome...and please consider doing a sequel...^_^...i commend your brother for not letting you give up on this fic...go give him a hug for me ^_^!! lol...i really loved it..AWESOME FIC! Anyways, keep up the good work...best of luck! Peace Out! |
 wittyying 2007-04-24 . chapter 1I love this, thanks for writing it. One of the better all around reincarnation fics in my opinion. Looking forward to anything else you may write in the future. |
 Hinata Hyuuga-sama 2007-02-27 . chapter 1OMG...make a sequel! |
 Cooky6504 2007-02-26 . chapter 1OMG that was realy good, I have to admit I got lost in some places but only for a while. That was realy good, i was laughing when Neji told naruto "you were destined to be annoying" lol. Anyways I think that was realy good. |
 AlwaysHiei 2007-02-26 . chapter 1Beautiful. Just plain out beautiful. Honestly, so much better than my own. You're in for probably the longest review I've ever left, but it's more than well-deserved to you and your wonderful story.
Here goes:
Neji's T-shirt-- "Purely Genius" definitely matches, and such a cool detail to the story.
I adored the explanation of how they all looked-- particularly Naruto. My god, I loved how it sounds and I actually imagine it in my mind very well. So fitting! And an artist? Fitting too! He is such a creative person, after all. ^_^ The orange-colored hair-tips were just fantastic, and the earrings-- awesome. Plain out awesome. Sakura as a secretary, very fitting as well.
I love how you mixed in flashbacks, so well into the story. They came in at the right times, and made perfect sense.
The entire idea of the past, and their remembering-- so well-though out, and original. I mean it. I loved the whole idea of it.
Everything you described (Looks, scenes, everything) was easily shown in my mind, and flowed very well like a movie as I read.
The chocolate milk detail was precious, and so sweet whenever Neji gave her some. ^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^_^_^_^_^
Hinata as a 'curious cat' is so nice.
Every emotion expressed from these characters in this fic, I can also imagine, and feel slightly myself as I read.
Every detail, down to the hearts separating different scenes, was loved by me, as I found no flaws. Honest.
I adore this fic. It's one of the only ones I think I could read and re-read over and over, and never get tired. I know how hard you worked on this, and let me tell you-- it payed off.
This fic is amazing, and and a must-read for any NejiHina fan. Or even NejiHina-hater, it's so good.
Truly and magnificently, through and through, amazing.
You are so great at writing, and honestly, reading this, you've got no reason to envy "Cloud"-- Yours is so much better, so much more precious, so much more thought-out, so much more worked on, and so much greater! You would've won that contest, no doubt.
I adore your writing, and now you have me more anxious than ever for you to start posting that multichapter you spoke of, and those oneshot ideas you mentioned. I'm so excited for more from you, as I find your writing fantastic and endearing. This fanfic has pushed me to strive with my abilities to better my writing to level anywhere near your oh-so high one.
You are a great authoress, and I know you'll grow to become better and better to the point that's unimaginable for anyone to be so good. I've loved your works so far, and I know I'll love your future works as well.
Seeya,
AlwaysHiei |
 Simone 2007-02-25 . chapter 1 Oh my gosh! It's Uzumaki Sakura from the NejiHina guild who's giving you a high five!
This was an awesome fic, bravo and great job. :3 I wish the contest would have actually happened! This was such a great entry! I loved the idea! |
 HiMeYuKi 2007-02-24 . chapter 1this is very nice, it was depressing at first (that was makes the story more interesting and addicting) but so sweet at the end. I really love them, they fight for there love despite the fact that there were many walls between them, so sweet. |
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this is now probably one of my favourite stories of all time (which are very very few). putting it in my fave's list will be a huge unjustice, but i'll do it anyways X3
i worship your brother now, for helping you keep to this story. and you, of course. except for the sasunarusaky ot3 thing, i like all the naruto pairings you do :D |
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