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Force 'Hog
2009-09-25 . chapter 6
Heh, Nice! That's some talent you've got there. Hoping for an update soon!

Signed, Force 'Hog, The Chocolate Milk Messiah
Weuer
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
Thesaurus writing isn't such a good idea.
naruto1991
2009-01-07 . chapter 2
Hana
monkies ate my sisters
2009-01-01 . chapter 6
Ok, short version: Love story, please update
okibikami123
2008-12-31 . chapter 6
I just read your forum thing and now i completely understand why you made him so strong. In your forum it said he has the power of one kage but how is that at the power of one kage he's stronger than the any of the sannin? Im pretty sure Jiraiya was beyond kage level considering he almost beat pain. Yeah, other than that little quirk that i kinda dont get your story is still very awsome.
okibikami123
2008-12-31 . chapter 5
THERE IS NO WAY NARUTO CAN BE STRONGER THAN A SANNIN AND A KAGE AT THE AGE OF TWELVE OR THIRTEEN!! ITACHI'S NOT AT JIRAIYAS LEVEL AND YOU MADE HIM STRONGER THAN THAT!! If I remember correctly the manga states that Jiraiya would've beaten Pain if he found out about Pain's secret sooner. So in actuality your saying he's stronger than all the akatsuki members except for Shin. Its just not really probable to me. And why the hell is he a genin! he's beyond kage level and you make him a GENIN! all in all your story is great and im just saying that you should make Naruto a bit weaker. High chunin/low jounin.
Akira Stridder
2008-09-09 . chapter 6
whoa!!
Akira Stridder
2008-09-09 . chapter 5
whoaa!!
Akira Stridder
2008-09-09 . chapter 4
whoa!!
Akira Stridder
2008-09-09 . chapter 3
whoa!!
Akira Stridder
2008-09-09 . chapter 2
whoa!!
Akira Stridder
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
whoa!
the panda
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
A) naruto quiet, but not super dark emo hates the world.

That was my vote but I like the way this is set up. Awesome title btw. Such a cool title deserves a great story so...kep up the good work.
pax-draconix
2008-08-27 . chapter 5
Look, there's a problem with rating the characters by their job titles or kick-names. It's easier to have classes. That's because there can be an A class genin (Kabuto) for instance. Then there's the fact that two of the Legendary Sannin were Kages, so having them represent separate groups is problematic. Also, for cases like Kakashi who was an ANBU Captain before retiring to become a Jounin... Those are just ranks, and are not based solely on power. The ranks are E, D, C, B, A, and S save for anomylies like the Yondaime who was listed as an SS class shinobi in Iwa's Bingo books. It's not really that descriptive when you describe their power based on rank, instead of class. There can be generalizations, of course. Most civilians are E rank, most genin would be ranked as D class, but you have some weaker ones who might more realistically rank E and some stronger ones who could be ranked at C, B, or even A - Gaara was a genin, after all. Not telling you this to be insulting, just helping you to clear up your story a bit. I know it can be annoying when a character is described, for example, as being Sannin class but not Kage class when, for one thing, two of the Sannin are Kage - if you count Orochimaru - and Sannin isn't even a rank, per ss. It rouhgly translates to three nin, and was just a nickname given to a group of genin by Hanzou of rain because he saw potential in them. Till next time, keep up the good work, because your story is going well. Ja ne.
pax-draconix
2008-08-27 . chapter 2
Hm, I'm torn between Hinata and Hana... Ah well, either will do but I'll vote for Hinata. Naruto might need her kindness to keep him balanced.
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