I finally got to finish reading this fic and I'm so glad I did. Very well done!

This was just fabu! You are an excellent writer and I love your style. Great dialogue, spot on characterizations, just top notch.

These were all insanely sweet. *happy sigh* Eric is just too cute in his macho way. :)

A most fitting final chapter, since it finishes with (in my opinion) the most important member of the team, and it also coincides wonderfully with the ending timeline of the show.
You've chosen very fitting background situations for all five chapters; this one especially, since you wove it so skillfully into show canon.
It was a pleasure to beta them for you.
Congratulations on yet another challenge flawlessly completed :)

Adorable last line of Wes', I could actually hear his voice :)

This almost seems like the only possible conclusion for how things went, I can't imagine Eric reacting the way he did if he didn't know ahead of time.

Loved this story, Camille, another great job!

Sierra

I love the Casablanca ending! It was nice to see that Wes worked out that Eric had a hand in getting job of command of the Guardians. Shame to see this little story finishing actually, it's a very nice little character piece! Plus it has made me want to watch Casablanca again!

I have to say it: aww! I can so see Eric doing that. Loved the fic! Can't wait for more!

It's a shot in the dark, but I'm thinking the quotation is from "Casablanca." ("Louis, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.")

Amazing story. Your character study was realistic, yet haunting. So many fanfiction writers fall into the trap of extreme OOC, wherein the character loses her or his essence as a result of making the story powerful. Perhaps this is because they come up with the story first, then the character second. You, on the other hand, seem to analyze your character and build from there. This shows great care and a keen understanding of what it takes to write good pieces, fanfiction or otherwise.

Your "Five Things" was at once humourous and angsty, hopeful yet frustrated. These simultaneous contradictions-so beautifully played out-are a testament to your abilities as a writer.

I look forward to reading more of your work.


ANGEL


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Well done! BTW, my problem with the quote at the end is that I have heard it several places - and I can't recall a single specific one! LOL

Wow, that really does make sense. Great job.

good ending to a good fic.

Not sure how I missed that last one, but great job on both! Awesome ending. I think I'm gonna actually watch TF now.

Great chapter, and this one is one that could have really come close to actually happening, though we'll never know for sure, but we can think it.

Ugh, ending on a cheesy line! I know, it's totally in character for Wes, but it doesn't make it any less painful. ;-) lol

Greta closing, great fic.

Aw...Eric's nice and fuzzy side. I'm kinda sad these are all done, though.