primeval is just the best i dont no why then dont do it enay more

First ever Primeval fanfic :3 You started the love!

Awesome luv it!

It was sweet. I enjoyed it. Personally, I prefer Connor and Abby, even in series 1, but I definitely saw things between Abby and Stephen.

Nicely done,

*Gaia

He's beautiful indeed! And this little story is quite beautiful, as well. Your writing is lyrical and descriptive. I could see everything happening and sympathize with Abby's thoughts and feelings. Good work!

cool

Wonderful, Cariad! We are just now getting Primeval in the US, and I am so hooked. Yours is the first fan fic I've read, and I really enjoyed this little peek into Abby's and Stephen's thoughts. Looking forward to more from you! Thanks for sharing!

AJ

is there gonna be more?

Happy sigh. Another great little S/A moment.

thanks for sharing.

cheers

Louise

aww, I love this story,it's definitly a better ending than the one in the episode )

this made me so happy! aww it was so cute

Okay, firstly, i loved this story, and secondly, how can you (werewolflemming) not like abby and stephen pairing, they are so cute! I'm not really for the stephen and nick pairing.

you should write more to this story it was very good for a beginning

Aww, this was a nice story. Even though Abby/Stephen isn't my favourite pairing, I still enjoyed it. There needs to be loads more Primeval fanfiction! :D

Ah, this is way better than the ending on TV. I felt cheated by it as well. Very sweet and clever, well done!