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Bladed Darkness
2009-08-03 . chapter 30
I immensely enjoyed this whole little series of stories. Particularly Bumi, Ursa, Sokka, and Suki, but most importantly all of them.
The Pterodactyl
2009-07-24 . chapter 30
This was glorious. There really is no other word to properly describe how well you have captured these characters. It's hard, so hard, to choose, but I have to say that I especially loved Prof. Zei's and Bumi's chapters. Zei's because...well, **, it was just awesome. No other way to say it. And Bumi's because it reminded me of how much I love that guy, and how much it sucks that there isn't more good fic about him. Where's the Bumi love?!

Anyway, yeah, awesome job. Total fav.

The Pterodactyl
meiousei
2009-07-13 . chapter 30
I do very much love these drabbles. I just finished watching Avatar for the first time, and I love it so much. You've done such a great job talking about not only the main characters, but also those who only make brief appearances. It's always a pleasure to read your work.

I'm particularly fond of Sokka and Suku's exchanges, but the others are wonderful too. I like that you used various narrative styles and experimented a bit.
SilverInkblot
2009-07-12 . chapter 14
Is the title a reference to an old Twilight Zon episode? I remember an episode by that name where the just wanted enough time to read.
SilverInkblot
2009-07-12 . chapter 13
The last line for Jet was *excellent* I can't think of a better set of final words for him. Just perfect.
SilverInkblot
2009-07-12 . chapter 9
Death, Destroyer of Cabbages made me lol. =D

I love your take on the cabbage merchant. Just can't quit can he?
SilverInkblot
2009-07-12 . chapter 5
Faving this until I have more time to read it all. It's very good so far from what I can tell.
midnightwaters
2009-03-26 . chapter 30
I admire your ability to see from all those characters' points of views and write these wonderful, insightful drabbles. My favourite is the one with Yue and her dad.
Escajunkie
2009-01-30 . chapter 25
This entire series is well thought out and excellently written. You did a very good job of staying true to the characters and avoiding the temptation to just write whatever thought came into your head. You really captured the essence and soul of the characters, and because you did it makes these believable tales. I could see Mike and Bryan reading these and saying "Now there is someone who understands what a story is."

So once again bravo. It is writers like you that make fanfiction enjoyable and not just plain frustrating.

P.S. Tui and La, JooDee, Bumi, and Azula were the best. Especially the last two.
Reginleifthevalkyrie
2008-12-26 . chapter 14
I play Prof. Zei in an online roleplay community of mine, and this is one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read.
Emmy
2008-12-15 . chapter 26
I'd like to commend you for a wonderful piece on Ursa. You have taken an idea that is commonly used in fanfic for this fandom, and articulated it beautiful. Your style and voice in this are perfect. It fits perfectly.
Wellington
2008-12-11 . chapter 22
Remarkably good! King Bumi's voice is dead-on.
MoonClaimed
2008-12-05 . chapter 2
How did you think of this? It's genius and amazing and sad and sweet and amazing...
I love this!
Shadow Wasserson
2008-11-03 . chapter 16
Augh! I keep trying to tell myself to not review until I finish, but I just can't help it. This whole collection is SO GOOD. Seriously, I felt like crying more than once, and you just get the FEEL of the characters so well... I'm kinda jealous, actually.

The one with Jet, and Zei, and Aang, and Koh, and Zhao, and Toph, and, and, and!

One of the best collections I've ever seen.

-SW
The One And Only Lobster
2008-09-25 . chapter 23
Oh, this made me so sad. I want to cry, but I'm in class and I can't.
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