Wow, interesting story. I figured Shikamaru knew it was Ino in Temari's body, but I think Ino has a point that he should have kissed Ino (in Ino's body) first. Wonderful job.

it was fantastic!

Aw...How cute! Shikamaru x Ino rock my socks! You almost got me there with Temari...*phew*. ^.^

Princess Io of Macedonia

This was great. You guys know your drama! Sequel?

So cute! It's really sugoi!
I liked the idea of Ino taking over Temari's mind (mohaha, i don't like Temari) and then talk to Shika.
Anyway, great story!
Love /nazaliasan
(and, want a idea? Listen to the song "Who's that Girl" by Hilary Duff, it sounds like it's Ino singing about Temari and Shikamaru.)

Wow. Very well thought out, and a spectacular originality in the writing! but, i did notice some spelling errors. ^^; still an excellent story all around!

That was exellent work =)

wow, that was great! loved it! you mixed the fluff and angst well. the whole temari under mind transfer thing and shika kissing her, thinking he was kissing ino and actually kissing ino in the mind of temari was awesome, very original and well done. lol i am really looking forward to the next season! you rock at shikaino!

luv it! InoShika rocks! You're a great author! ^-^