that was so christian

well done

I really liked your story, it was truly Christian Troy. Having doubts and hopes about his lifestyle and coming back to reality with a hard hit. Hope you write more.

Loved it, Christian Troy at his best (well best for him) the ending fit the character so no worries it was a great one hope you write some more.

whoa! very powerful piece. I can well imagine this happening. of course there's always a what next, no matter how final the last sentence looks.