Really great, hope you figure something out soon!

I know how it feels, and I compeletely understand you. Take as much time as you need!

plz write more,its been 4 months!!this story is the first other than stephanie myers version to make me cry!!plz!~!

Aw You made me cry all the way through it right from chapter 1...I cant wait until you update again. I love 'the leaving song' It's one of my favorites.

I think I already told you this, but your story is amazing. Jasper seems so...underdeveloped in the actual book, but you do a great job bringing him out more...=D

awsome story! it's always fun to read about the other point of veiw

This chapter was so sad. I cried at the end, you are a very talented writer and you show the character's emotions well. Great job, update soon!

This is really good - you are a great writer! You have really captured all the emotions very well. Can't wait to read the next chapter - post soon!

I really like your story. your a good writer. I'm not an emotional person. I never cry or blush. and I dont show emotion much. But I'm sitting here crying. Thats how good your story is. Keep writing.

I really like your story. your a good writer. I'm not an emotional person. I never cry or blush. and I dont show emotion much. But I'm sitting here crying. Thats how good your story is. Keep writing.

that's so sad:( please update soon!

soo sad! =( hopefully with some luck Alice might make it...update soon! =)

This chapter was so sad! But good, of course. Thanks, and please keep writing/ update soon!

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Gah.

Alice! Call! Do something! Update!

I LOVE IT!