Impressive! I thought that my pairings were wierd enoguh, but you win first place!

That was really good. I liked how you wrote it not making sense until the end. I love fics like that. Well done....I will give it an 8!

I really liked that story. I just got the Manga Devil In Miss Urd and Mara is like my fave character now. I like this story.

Sweet! I liked the twist!

Nice little fic. I found it interesting, and you don't see much about Mara. It definitely worked for me.

Hmmmm. This was typed, written, however you want to say it, really well. I liked it, it was interesting!

Short, but pretty good, with the descriptions and so on. I like it!

Very good, very good. I like Marller very much -- this demonstrates her personality quite well, and I do believe you should write more about her. I'm sure she's basking in the glory of this piece at any given moment -- say, now.

To everyone:Hey hey hey! its Jaxx! Yes! its true! i helped come up with this AMAZING - if i do say so myself - idea! but - it was my 'miga Delphi who wrote it! isn't it great? i think so! neways, write nice, kind, good reviews so she'll write some more of this kewlie story! :)
To Delphi - its great! btw, i saved our newest convo - the miko one...speaking of...are you eva gonna post that other story? it was SO good! talk to you soon gurlie! Smiles from Jaxx :)

I was told by a friend to read this so i guess it doesn't make much sense to me, it is a nice story, kinda sad tho. Well, good job. :)