That was really good. I liked it.

That was the sweetest. I loved that. I truly did. It showed sorrow, happiness, love, everything. It was incredible.

Lovely. You have a nice experimentaly style which I have never seen in fanfiction, do you write original stuff as well?

Sweet! Jacob and Bella story, yay!

That was a wonderful, poetic piece. Quite beautiful, really. Fantastic work. ^^ Keep it up.

So... when did this start?

i like it, it makes me think about the begining in new moon.
how she's broken and she finds him, jacob, becomes her crutch.
its sweet