... wow, I love nejihina, and this is like... anti-nejihina, but amazingly... I loved it! It was awesome! You should write more stuff like this

Okay...
hhahahahs.
the plot was rather... weird,
but your story was good nonetheless.
:D

Oh, wow poor Hinata and Naruto. Neji is such a meanie

Will a simple sorry bring back the dead? Neji got what he deserves.

I cried when Naruto died and I was still crying at the end.Poor Naru-kun!

A OMG! thaqt was really good!

This was great, I liked it a lot. you did a great job, and the plot was good. Everything was correct (grammar and all that) and that is a rare thing. It was very good. Neji totally got what was coming to him, although I kind of did feel bad for him. I pity Naruto too, he died, and he had feelings for Hinata too...right? Anyway, poor Hinata, who is she gonna marry now?

Oh well, it just proves you've written something good, when you can get a reader thinking! Great job.

WOAH! DAMN! That was so AWESOME! It's cold-blooded and just plain karma because Neji so deserved that! Serves the bastard right for all that crap he put Hinata through! I loved the ending the way she mocked him like that it was so great and screwed up at the same time because it was so wrong lol! You'll probably think I'm some kind of twisted freak or something but I can't help that swell of pride I get when Hinata gets revenge on people torturing her like that. Your 1-shot is great and awesome job, I loved it! Ciao!