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Mori Yousei Khickadee15
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abusePlease update this is a great story to me so far and ive read alot of them keep up the goodwork please please please update! :)
Double Trouble! GB Twins!
2008-06-30
ch 3, anon.
abuseHey, your story's pretty good! If I were a teacher, I'd give it a B+ since you don't have alot of grammar issius.

- Reiley GB




Che, I've read better.

- Allie GB
UnforgettableDM
2008-06-14
ch 2, anon.
abusei'm absolutely disagree with you using the line 'Jesus Christ in hell' you should not simply write the name of God in things like this.you are not only breaking the rule but it is absolutely insulting.
hikaru123
2008-06-02
ch 3, anon.
abuseGO GO GO! i hope that you can update more chapters on this! your are an amazing writer!
Svettstrumpa
2008-05-26
ch 3,
abuseYOU ARE A GENIUS!(sp?) ONE OF THE GREATEST CHAPTERS EVER! can't wait until you update agian :D
katie
2008-05-22
ch 3, anon.
abuseomg!!...i loved the story...i would really like it if you posted the 4th and 5th chapters sometime soon...
Nina12497
2008-04-14
ch 3,
abuseum its been like a year and yeah it'd be really nice if u could update :]
sadbird
2008-04-13
ch 3,
abuseOMG THIS IS LIKE MY FAVORITE STORY SO FAR! PLEASE CONTINUE OR ELSE I WILL DIE FROM TORTURE! I LOVE IT! ...hehe sorry i am a little TOO hyper :P PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTERS! PLEASE!
Akatsuki-Girl554
2008-03-30
ch 3,
abuseI have read this story more than 20 times already! GAH! Its just THAT good...and i might be asking for a little too much...but...can you make a sequel? I would scream "YES! MY LIFE IS TOTALY COMPLETE NOW!" if you do. heh heh, im sorry,but I am that big of a fan!

See ya.
Wow
2008-03-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseAH wheres the 4th and 5th I can't wait!
Grey Winged Wolf
2008-03-06
ch 3, anon.
abuseThere will be another chapter? I'm now completely blissful. Here I was about to ask for a sequal when I hear that great news^^ Can't wait.
i-am-cool2121
2008-03-02
ch 3,
abuseOh. My. God. What a twist! This is such a good story. OKay, anyways, you said at the end of the chapter that there will be a fourth chapter. But you put your story as complete. I'm not sure what you'll end up doing ( Adding a fourth chapter or just leaving it) but I would like to request a sequel or another chapter. What a great story. I'm also a fan of Airborn (that is one of my all-time fav storyies ever!). An update of ANY of your stories would be greatly appreciated.

Stephanie :)
animeismyname
2008-03-01
ch 3,
abuseAnother chapter! YES! I can't wait. This story is amazing! It's funny that everyone thinks she's crazy though. lol
dc
2008-02-27
ch 3, anon.
abusewha? what's this? it ended here? that was like completely totally unexpected! I hope you keep your word and UPDATE! It can't end here, i mean c'mon, i am sure Sakura's time with the Akatsuki hasn't ended yet!

Please update soon! There are still at least 2 chapters to go, right? Please update! XD
Rinael11
2008-02-23
ch 3,
abusesuch a great story! so poignant! and filled with such intense emotions!! i so love it! hope you update it ASAP!! keep it up please!
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