AH! it's AMAZING cant wait for next update lol cant wait to read what she does but i might have an idea ;) lol

O Nice story, wonder where it is going... :P

wow this story i can see is going to be a HIT!!
this is good stuff and you keeping Jareth character the same. Cant wait till your done with the next chapter!!
Please hurry im gaging here lol

i got a feeling i am going to really like this story!!
i really liked the poem so i cant wait for chapter 2