That was cute!

Hahahahahaha!
Good job!

One Word: PRACTICE

Trust me, i used to write like this, and man, when i read it again HORRIBLE was the first thing that came to my mind. How about this? Try writing a tragedy story or two while listening to some emo music that touches you or makes you sad a bit. At least anything slow and inspirational where you can feel the music and let the words just flow through your fingers as you type.just type in anything about any image that comes through your mind. Then after your tragedy story (or two), have people read it, preferebly your English teacher (trust me on the teacher part) and when/if you get positive feedback, try writing things like these again, maybe listening to more lively music but just then that would be optional in my suggestion.

So cute!

That was good, lol that little dragon, hope to see some more like this.

That was so funny -passes out from laughing-

very cute story. one flaw the dragons name is hakuryu. but al in all a very very cute story. *big smile*