Mayuri deserves more fiction about him, yes. So yay! I think it was a good look into how his mind works! Thank you!

Another great story!

I think Mayuri is THE creepiest character in the whole Bleach series, well except maybe for Syazel - two twisted peas in a pod.

Having said that, Mayuri is fascinating and this really captures his curiosity, rationality and excentricity all at the same time. I can absolutely imagine him furious to know that Aizen bested him in a contest of wits.

cool.

The best and definitive Mayuri fic there is. Be proud of this one!

think urahara's got power of hypnotisim?

Incredible! I have never seen anyone keeping Mayuri so nicely in character! It's just so... Wow!

I believe this is an exceptionally in depth and well written piece I look forward to your other entries involving this character.

I can hardly imagine a worse jailer than Mayuri. Nice fic', especially in regards to Mayuri's motivations.

Fantastic. This was brilliantly written and thought out. Mayuri was spot on and one hell of a creepy crack clown, pure love right there x

Wowz..

mayuri is ** isn't he? very cool, liked how he figured out that Aizen's glasses weren't real.
loved mad scientist's temper tantrem. mad scientist is my little mickname for mayuri. just for your information, Aizen's nickname is mr. nice guy aka evil mastermind.
keep up the good work!

An interesting look into Mayuri's mind and perspective. Well written too.

That was...interesting. I like Mayurific, and that was a very good one - not what I expected, but still in character and very, very good.

a truly unique idea... i never even thought of a fic featuring Mayuri and Aizen,but this was seriously original. Mayuri's perspectives were amazingly spot-on.
great work!

interesting...it is a very, very unique perspective on aizen's betrayel-just as the summary foretold.

some of the sentances do not read smoothly

"Oh, the fact of the betrayal itself didn't matter in the least."

if you had omitted the "the fact of" it would have improved the fluidity of the sentance greatly.

in no way was this review meant to be discouraging...keep up the good work!