great story. i know i'm being stupid but i'm confused on who he's planning to kill

Maybe it's 'cause I keep getting interrupted every half-sentence at work, but I don't really get the last bit... the punch line or whatever. I assume she's pregnant but why would he want the maternity Dr to blow up?

the end confused me

Adored it. Seriously, abso-bloody-lutely fan-**-tastic. So hot. Wow. Just wow. :)

Wicked woman! Just wicked!

Cracky, but written in a serious manner. I liked this. A lot. From Lily's confession to the awkward sex to the ending (heh heh, Earl Grey, always a classic). I'm not entirely sure if you're implying that Lily had an abortion, or just if Snape is Harry's father...either way, nicely done.

*claps*

lovely