Very nice. Sheppard's saved. The Ancient learned to let go. And Ronon gives John CPR...that was yummy! Well done and hope to see something from you in the future!

I have enjoyed your story. You are quite good with description and have a way with words. The tone of the characters will continue to improve. The plot is a bit reminiscent of "Sanctuary" - but nice and whumpy. Keep writing.

Aack you did the major whump on Sheppard. Very glad you convinced Ga'neth to help him.

Life should be interesting for the new villagers now!

Great story.

I finally read it. Great job! I found that wraith thing very smart and loved the Ronon parts.

Lovely fic, really enjoyed this. Some really nice descriptive writing. nice ending, are you planning on a sequel? maybe see Ga'neth and the others again in the future?

Anyway relly nice job, thanks for sharing

*iz sad* The story is over. I really liked it and I'm glad that Ga'neth came to his senses and helped John. You did a great job with Ronon helping John and I loved the part when Ronon said if he ever did that again, he would kill him himself.

I'm crossing my fingers that you write more. Talk to you later!!

Sherryw

OMG will they make it back in time??
Another nice chapter, please update soon :)

I really like the story you have created. Ga'neth is certainly an interesting character! I just hope they can get back to Shep in time! A most interesting chapter. Well done!! :)

yay!! they found him and he is going to help!
They better get back to john in time!! or else...
Very exciting chapter, which is a compliment to your writing abilities!

update soon!!

I knew it. He sensed the Wraith. I'm really enjoying this story. I guess I'm not surprised he attacked an Atlantian ship, since he was left on the planet by them. I'm hoping that they make it back to John on time. I do volunteer to give him CPR. Please pick me. :-) See ya next chappie!

Only 2 more chapters ? :(

You are doing a wonderful job telling this story. I love the flow of it. Everyone has a part to play!

Can't wait to hear what the healer has to say!

I really loved that chapter. I liked the fact that Ronon stayed behind to take care of Sheppard. We aren't used to seeing him in that role. Not in control. Loving the story and I can't wait for more. Update soon!

Another great chapter. Good job with Ronon - characterization is nice.

The plot continues. I'm dying to find out about Ga'neth and what his problem was with Sheppard. Well off to the next chappie.