Tis is AWESOME. You better update ASAP.

Hello i love this story its really cool . Hey i got one idea can Tenten have a female demon and can the demon be a black dragon with white wings and claws pluse head and nose horns and purple ears that wold be cool . Well see yeah .

*.* Tis' AWESOME! YOSH!!

Interesting chapter. I had to go back and skim the earlier chapters to remember what had happened. Love the story. Update soon.

so looking forward to the next chapter

*Sweat drops*
Nice chapter though! xD
Ano... so they are both dead...? *Worried*

update soon

update soon please

nice chap

omgwhatgonnahappennext? Sorry, this is soo good, and this kisho guy better look good!! well, I really like this, please update when you can.

~lilchibihina

That's all right everyone has bad days. And I would definitely prefer if Lee died rather than Tenten or Neji.

Really good - and funny too! :)

HA! You're funny, you know that? I LOVE this chapter! My fav. funny parts were:
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He was still processing what had just happened, and I saw him reach up and lightly touch his cheek.

I really hoped he wasn’t gonna say, “I’ll never wash this cheek again.”

That line is so overused.
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Hinata twitched at seeing her cousin stutter and look like…well her! It was disturbing. “I’m so happy for you, Neji-nii-san! Everyone always thought you and Tenten-san would make a cute couple!” She forced a smile onto her face. It’s not that she wasn’t happy, but she was still disturbed at Neji’s behavior.

And it just so happened that Hanabi and Hiashi were coming down the hall at this moment in time.

“Couple? Neji!?” Hanabi stated with a mocking tone. “Omigawd! HAHA!” She started cracking up and rolled onto the floor. “Who’s the poor girl!? HA!”

Neji sighed and looked down at the very interesting floor. Dust was very amusing when nothing else could get worse.

Ha, who am I kidding? I said Hiashi was there, didn’t I?

“Neji…is this true?” Hiashi lifted the boy's head and glared into his depressed eyes.

“…” Neji mumbled some words inaudibly.

“Louder.”

“Sort of.” He huffed into Hiashi’s face.

Hiashi and Hanabi stared at the prodigy for a moment…

Then they started laughing, again.
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HAHAHAHAHAHA! GREAt story! UPDATE soon!

...*twitch twitch*
*silence*
...*blink blink*...*takes a deep breath in*
...*silence*
...*clears throat*...
WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT THERE? AH AH AH! *smiles* Okay, I'm done. And there will be character death? Someone on Team Gai? =O Please update soon!

XD I don't know any of the bases. Never been there. Although it's considered weird at my school if you haven't had a bf at the age of 14. ._. Oh well. I'm too tomboyish to care about my love life right now. But that don't mean I don't have a sense of romance! XD