That was deep...It makes so much sense. I always thought of evolution as a way of maturing, both physically and mentally. I like your writing style! :D It's nice.

that was great

I think is good the POV on Charizard... his opinion of not obeyin... i've always... wanted 2 know why wont he obey i got angry... when he wouldn't... but I was pretty... sure he had a reason... I knew Ash didn't take care of him... but there r times Ash needed him... but finally he obeyed so cute u did about him... i loved it X3 i hope there's more of this... :) keep it up ;)

i loved when he send charizard thinking it would obey, to only get him to breath fire at him.

good time they were.

You know, when Ash saved Charizard in the Orange Islands like he did when they first met, the dragon probably realized that despite all he'd done to Ash since first evolving, Ash loved him all the same, so your fic actually makes sense in that light.

like i said before, i like how you do things from the POV of a pokemon. i also like how you give reasons for why they do things.

Very good, but I think you're being slighly unfair. Ash did save little Charmanders life. But you brought up some very good points and, as always, the feelings and emotions were great. I just like trainers that treat their Pokémon as equals.

That would explain a lot...

Incredible. You're GOOOOD. *affectionately pats Lightning on the head. The Raichu coos contentedly* At least my little Lightning likes me. I need some more friends...

And Charizard doesn't see it that way because... he knows that is bullcrap. ASH ABANDONED PRIMEAPE! HE GAVE IT TO A MAN WHO DIDN'T EVEN CARE ABOUT HIS OWN FAMILY! *puff* *pant* Anyway, Charizard has the right idea. Why should it evolve? Why become "strong"? All it would get is more battles.

This is great! This is the second fic I've read by you, and you're obviously very good at portraying the Pokemon's feelings about their trainers. Good job!

Very well written, keep it up! Oh and please continue adding to espeon and it's sequals!

poor charizard

:grins:: I like Charizard fics. And I like Charizard-thinks-about-his-disobedience-to-Ash fics better. This was good. Keep it up, Farla.

What do I think? I think you're a marvelous writer who's work is better than some I've seen published. _