 Aroara Moon 2009-10-06 . chapter 6The story got Confusing at times but it was still good. |
 the cake is a lie! 2009-09-13 . chapter 6 i LOVE this story. but it's been a year since it was lat updated! so all that remains is- should i give up on it? |
 UchihaxSasukexox 2009-08-27 . chapter 6Tell me know. Tell me if Naruto dies in the next chapter (Whenever that may be submitted) or not. Because I would like to stop reading if that is the case.
I find that there is no point in having a character go through an 'epic' adventure. Enduring multiple hardships only to die in the end. It's pointless.
So tell me, does he die or not? |
 nancy 2009-08-19 . chapter 6 I like ur story ^=^ write more plz C: |
 Psycho Itachi 2009-08-07 . chapter 1 Meh... NaruSasu sucks but I agree Naruto is more fitting as Seme. Uke Naruto is freakin' creepy. Sasuke's emo-ness helps him be the b*itch. But anyway, did you read Naruto Chapter 458? Naruto is in love with Sakura! ^_^ Now Sakura must choose between him and Sasuke. >_< |
 xxxXXXSMILEXXXxxx 2009-07-02 . chapter 6Have i reveiwed this story before? well if i have i'm sorry for bothering you again but if not, hello, nice meeting you! As for the story it's good, you don't really come across many medi evil kind of themed naruto fics, usually it's either ninja or highschool or office jobs kind thing if you get what i mean... it's refreshing to have some variety every now and then and your story really tweaked some cords in my heart... now thats all out in the open there's not much left to say other than i can't wait for the next chapter... |
 DeMoNDYnaSTy 2009-05-20 . chapter 3I am lovin dis story
can't wait for an update
keep the good plot up girl = ] |
 Sa-co 2008-12-16 . chapter 6its so good its one of my favourite stories please update soon i can't wait t see what happens . please i hope gaara gets his memories back |
 moopad 2008-10-24 . chapter 6No sasuke, u heartless naruto if u take your grudge out on poor sasuke
actually i'd prefer sasuke playing hard to get. harder means there'll be time for developing relationship and understanding
your fic has such an awesome plotline
can't wait
thanx
sasuke don't give your heart to this cold b* naruto! |
 Moola Deena 2008-10-23 . chapter 6Oh noes! A bitter Naruto? *tries to imagine that* :x It doesn't suit him? Is he mad at Sasuke just because Sakura was in love with him and not Naruto?
And I did a little math. ^^ So, Naruto is three years older than Sasuke, correct? And Sakura is the same age as Naruto = three years older than Sasuke. When Naruto and Sakura met they were twelve. And Sakura had seen Sasuke at that same age, making Sasuke nine when she saw him. :x You don't think it's unusual for a twelve year old girl to fall for a nine year old?
Oh well. ^^; It's possible, but I still think you maybe should reduce Sakura's age with maybe a year or something?
Anyways, I really like this story (the age-thingy don't really bother me, I just tried to be realistic ^^; ) and I'm loking forward to the next chappie~. :)
Alert! |
 animegirl305 2008-10-18 . chapter 6how many did naruto have |
 arenha 2008-10-17 . chapter 6OMG! I totally LOVE this story! The plot is so amazing and sweet in a way. T^T But you can make things so sad too! The thing happening to Gaara! (Hopefully he recovers.) And the early death of the Uchihas! T^T So sad. I love the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke though! It's so sweet! ^_^ Please update soon. This fanfiction is totally going to be on my watch list and favorites! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!~! |
 Shadeofblue 2008-10-17 . chapter 6This fic is really interesting. Unexpected things always happens, hahah. I never expect to see Zabuza's name there. Anyway, the next chapter seems really interesting. Update soon! :) |
 alyuchiha913 2008-10-16 . chapter 6Holy motherf**king shit. That's what came out of my mouth when I saw Zabuza's name. I so did not see that coming.
This...this...this is one freakin awesome fanfic OMG. It captivated me from the very beginning. Unlike alot of fics, it's unpredictable and keeps me guessing. I'm guessing part of the reason for that is the fact that you, yourself, aren't sure of exactly how it's going to end. Normally that isn't a good thing...but with this, it makes the story that much more unpredictable, and it hold's the reader's interest. I love it. I absolutely love it.
One thing bothers me about this fic though. There are quite a few spelling/grammatical errors. Usually, they annoy me to no end, but since this fic has such an amazing plot, and is so well-written otherwise, they don't bother me as much as they usually would. However, it's best if you get them corrected. Perhaps you could get a beta-reader? The quality of this story would be greatly improved once those errors are corrected.
You're doing a really good job though. Keep up the good work, and please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Peace Out! ^_^ |
 Nejislady 2008-10-16 . chapter 6OMG! I was thinking of this story a week ago and couldn't remember the name of it and was wondering if it was complete yet. I had it saved on my desktop all along reviewing some of the stories I like to see if they were updated yet. I'm so glad you updated this I really really like it. This chapter was good with Gatou getting what he deserved for being so sadistic with Gaara. On the other hand, Naruto got poisoned arrows shot in him and to top it off he meets Zabuza after all this time. I hope Naruto survives the poison and Zabuza turns into an ally of sorts. I like that you gave us a preview of the next chapter. You did it like TV that was cute.:) Well, now I have you on the story alert list to know when to read again. I'm mostly on affnet now which where I saw this yesterday and it got me thinking, "I know this story, don't I?" Great chapter! Thanks for coming back to it! |