Amazing love the pairing

i love it

this was nice, so what's keiko's reaction going to be? how will the others on the team react?

Hmm... Why am I such a sucker for this? I was not planning on reading this whole thing but you hooked me and reeled me in. I have my issues with some things like the way you chose to portray his relationship with Keiko and the position you gave Kagome... It's just, Keiko is the one he grew up with since he was a kid. So I don't think it was a good idea to give Kagome that role instead. _ But if you hadn't, it definitely would've been an obstacle. Still, even though I don't know you, I think you could've probably overcome that obstacle somehow. ;) The other thing that bothers me is the mate marking thing. Cuz god, I think that is the CHEESIEST thing the fandom ever made up. And it's only worked well in about two fanfictions that I've read. And for this oneshot it's just weird to think of Yuusuke giving her a "mate mark" BUT it DOES blend the two series very well, making this a great crossover.

So there you have it. Equal shares of positive and negative. But you may've noticed that I favorited this, my overall opinion of this is good! I loved it!

though i wish you put in more romance still a great story!

LOL

XD Hell yeah! Yusuke is just too awesome to hate... *grins* And I started laughing my ass out when I noticed it was a Paris Hilton song! *laughs* Anyway, keep up the great work!

Ja ne,

Bloodcherry

Aww what a sweet one shot. I am not familiar with the song but even without the song a great read :)

This was so cute! I loved it.

Well that's Drama

Cute...keep up the good work. :)

Loved it! And the song wasn't so bad.

loved it

*shoots* I love you're story *shoot shoot* I really do, seiriously. but hey you said i could shoot you so I did...any ways good story, and keep up the good work with you're others.

Doing it a bit backwards, ne? And where’s everyone else when this is happening? Keep up the good work, dark