42! ^_^

i love it wow!!

Man, Logan is such a total d-ck. Loved how OC supported her. I love how transgenics can hear so well- everyone in the command center obviously heard her conversation with OC. And I like how they're all supporting her hooking up with Alec. Speaking of- I love how he tries to protect and support her. I really enjoyed how he let her know his feelings. However, there is definitely something that I would change- I would have loved for it to be longer. You know- you always hate it when a really good story comes to an end ;) Good job.

Nice story. Got to love Max and Alec. I love the way you wrote OC. You have talent. Keep at it.

haha omg this story was amazingly amazing!

That was really cute, great job with this!

Tee hee, cute :) I love the cheese :)

I have one thing to say. AW I swear I was smiling the entire time first I was like Oh Damn you Logan! (Cuz you probably caught on by now that he's really not my favorite person... okay so I'm putting it lightly but you get the picture lol)

Then O.C. comes to the rescue like any bestfriend would with her unbridled wisdom and just plain unconditional love for her boo. (Love her to pieces)

Loved the banter with O.C. and Alec very well done and I could picture the entire scene. Done like a pro! (Bambo LOL)

Now the main part that got me wanting to hug my pillow and just close my eyes and go Man I wish my honey would do that was the singing. As cheesy as it sounds, it just goes to show you that Alec loves her so much and they're so so perfect for each other. (Take aside the fac that I was totally picturing Jensen singing hahaha, M m) The fluffiness was not overly done to make me gag but I doubt I would anyway but just enough to make my heart flutter. Great job for your only DA fic it was very well written. Aw! You should write more cuz god knows we can never get enough Alec/Jensen fluffiness!!

Very cheesy but you had me smiling the whole time.

>"Max," he took a step towards her, which only made her take one step back closer to the door.<

so he must have his exco on. very sexy. he is doing asha with this thing on. *oh my god* :-)

love it

omg! this was great!

loved the comment about Logan being blind in 10 years, btw!!

"now I have to go find of the Psy-ops guys so I can have that image burned from my brain" --> LOL!

Alec is adorably annoying (as always :D) This was a little cheesy, but in that adorable and very good way! Great little fic! You should really write more.

-dooski

I thought that was cute. And I forgot I used to really like that song, though I still have a hard time imagining Alec singing it to Max. Or that Max didn't get a case of the giggles when he did.

'Cause she was right, major cheese alert. But hey, who doesn't like a little cheese anyway?

That was a terrible thing for Logan to say to Max that she wasn't worth the trouble. Hello, how about all the trouble she went through strictly on his behalf? What a jackass. I hope Alec pummels him. Or better yet, Cindy can do it.

That would make a sweet sequel.

-Ellie

deliciously cheesy!

I liked it, very much! Cheesy or not it was great! You can't go wrong with MA.