So you actually updated! You're way more faster than I am!

Okay so this chapter was very Chain of memories styled. Specially the Moxt introduction a la Axel...Well maybe that's what you get for being No. 8...

This chapter showed Ned's mad novice skillz...

It's good

very good chapter, that's all I have to say.

well, i'll start off to say that through this i may be critical (forgive me, my friends did this) but i really like your story. It has a well put together plot, thoughtful insight on all the characters (something that's pretty hard, as i've found with my story.), and it also provides action in limited bursts not all at once. Just one little thing I'm perplexed about however. How will Ned get accustomed with the keyblade if his memories end up like the one in chapter 3? Unless you're going to do the fight scenes in between every memory. Again, great story.

That was a very sweet chapter, going through Ned's memory. Yay a fight in the next chapter is it Ned against Xchris (no. 6)?

It's good

Sex and kittens in a bag.

Next chapter, since it's a fight...

Bitches and hoes.

Yep.

This has been a review by SilentDre

Thank you!

D

And it begins.

Woot.

Drexan scene better be less-than-three or heads will roll.

...Just kidding.

...Maybe.

Well, I loved the begining, poor Ned he had to walk a lot.

I know the las two members, but the sixth I forgot. I remember that he got Marluxia's scythe, right?

Anyway update soon!

it's good. sorry for not reviewing again until now i kinda forgot about your story.

i read your first story when it was finished and never bothered to review. i'd like to say that this part seems like it'll be just as good or better. it's a really good story and i can't wait to read more of it.