You appear to have stopped updating this story...
No nonononono!

Hello.

I know it's been a while since you updated anything so I don't even know whether this message will ever reach you. But I've been wondering about your intention to finish this story.
I guess one could stop right there and leave the rest to the readers' imagination but I would really like read the story the way it was meant to be told and not the way I want it to go (especially since I'd probably miss out on a lot of details.. )

I really liked the storyline and your sense of language (?) and I loved the scene in Mr Tenoh's office. I think it was very captivating and well written. But I the change to the hallway scene came a bit too apruptly for my liking. like something else should have been shown first (though I couldn't say what.. ). The rest of the chapter was fine though. not choppy at all.

oh! and I love your Mr Kaioh!

Lena~

P.S. why do they try so hard to keep Haruka's gender a secret? and whose eyes are watching from the dark?

You know, I was really starting to enjoy this story until I got to this chapter and POOF! It's not finished.


Keep writing still? Please? *puppy dog eyes*

... although, you might not even get this message... It's been what... 19 months since this was updated?

Way cool story i hope u write some more i was really getting into it exspecilly the kiss it wasnt rushed at all

Oh my! It's been so long..! I hope you update.. This is just wonderful!

Poor fish...good chapter!

~ Wicked Prince X

I can't believe I only just found this story! I love it all!

Ruka and Michi are so cute together and yay for Ami being in this too ^_^

Love your OC characters too!

Please update soon :D

-VR

this story really is great and i have been waiting for the next chapters for many months now..are you going to be updating soon? hopefully u will... :)

It wasn't the first chapter or anything, I don't think it was too early. Besides, it's not like they did much with the kiss. It was sweet, and just like you to pull something like this off. I miss you Ruka... ~Neptune's Mask

Exelent, not chopy at all, I loved! but please... PLEASE next chapter!
Thanks.

Exelent, not chopy at all, I loved! but please... PLEASE next chapter!
Thanks.

I've began to fall in love with your writing. This chapter was wonderful and very well done, no, the entire story actually is well done.

Sanctus

I kind of had to skim through this chapter as I'm running out of time to read, but I liked it all the same. Haruka was quite the little biker wasn't she? ^^ Oh, and just something I noticed. The "queue" for Michiru is actually "cue" in that sense. I'm going to try and read the next chapter before I have to go. I'm hooked... I blame you!

“Just you jumped so high I lost sight of your feet for a moment.” I'm sorry, I loved that line. It's been a while since I've read your stories, and I'm sorry for that. I've missed them as well. This chapter was definitely lively and exciting, and I don't like Hiroshi. >.< He's a jerk. So I feel sad for Haruka having to put up with his crap. I can't wait to read what these two are going to come up with though. ^^

Great story. Great plot. Good work :)