Great story, really powerful impact you made using Superman and great work using him as a way to help Jake overcome his wife's Death.

Beautifully written and completely unique. It is wonderful to see Superman save someone because of who he is, not what he does. Very touching and certainly going in favorites!

Wow. I loved it. I wish I could write like you. Your characters seems so real.

I enjoyed this story a LOT. It isn't your "typical" Superman story at all. It's so hard to find a really original idea for a fanfic story in a popular category. I think you accomplished it very well.

This is one of the best stories I have read on fanfiction ever. The way that Clark and Jake interact and help is really touching. You chose a very emotional subject to write about, but succeeded brilliantly. Thank you for this story.

This was such an awesome story. You write in a way that the characters really come to life. They aren't flat. I could really feel what Jake was feeling, the pain and confusion. THat was amazing how you made an original character really pop and seem like you've known them forever. Those two kids were darling too. I have no doubt that that family will be alright. It was precious how you had Jake save superman and in turn superman not being superman save Jake. There's just somethign so special about that. I hope one day that Jake will meet Clark again and be able to tell him his thanks. I just wanted to thank you for writing such an amazing story. Well done.

I know I've read this before, maybe on another board or in another category. I still love it.