what's so hard about updating to you? i wrote a whole 7500 word story in 10 days, and that was me slacking off on it! I'm writing another story with about 2k chapters per update and updating almost daily!

ROFL! best typo ive ever read,

the elf who held her tightly raped in her blue arms

rofl its wrapped, raped means forced sex LOL

Hi, yay! I was so happy to get to read another chapter. I loved the descriptions and love. Aw. :) Just a few spelling errors, but it's fine. Another great chapter. I wonder if any new conflict will arise...? :)

(: i forgive you, especially since ive only had to wait 1 day rofl, im glad i found it when i did and that im possibly the review that caused you to remember this story! i really hope you do update more often, this story is perfect

next... sunday?? its BEEN A YEAR! please update! THIS STORY IS PERFECT! i think it's unfair to the readers of your story what your doing and you need to update more, alot more

w00t! it's a chapter! happy day!

Wolfie

Hi, yay! I liked it. Nice twist with the brother. Can't wait to read more.

DUDE! Uncool. its been like a year since you last updated. like actually. I am Mad At You. However, I shall forgive you if you update soon. *dignified sniff*
-khophey

I have no pitchfork, only good things to say ^^.
Very sweet once again, and I like this meeting, even though it was short.
Now, faster update! xD

Yay new chap!! I WANT MORE! ^^

This is not going to help the treaty me thinks. Or it could hard to say. Glad you got a new chapter out of this story.

I think its great you're updating again ^^
I cant wait to read the next bit!

Very nice! More please...I'm dying to know what happens.

oh. this is really good. i love it! update please! i especially love zatara. i wonder why bellwing ran away. i wouldn't have. but then, i'm not gay, and none of my boyfriends have ever been at war with my race. oh well. update soon!

I'd forgotten about this fic its great to read it again, I cant wait to read what happens next!