You refer to loveable Avera as a hobbit. In my mind hobbits have massive hairy feet lol. My hubby said halflings from the game are more like tiny humans, with the same proportions. How do you wish your readers to see Avera? As the LoTR hobbit or a tiny human?

An enjoyable read and brings in a lot of different elements of the story. Your character is developing but I still don't feel like we really know much about her yet. I'm sure that will come though. :)