i don't know if it was intentionally done but Draco's perspective reminded me very much of Holden Caulfield's in the Catcher in the Rye...

My God, you're brilliant, you know? This piece was simply... the writing was awe-inspiring. My hat's off to you, dahling.

I gave it a chance. Read it and thought about it. I am not happy with it. It didn't entice me. Too Americanized for me. I am Mexican, but prefer the characterization of a stories characters to be true to them.

Liz

Wow, really. This fic is full of so much, in such a short story.. Rigth now, I'm just amazed by it. Beautiful.

I am not logged in so posting as a stranger with the same username although... :)

FANTASTIC FIC! So matured! And when I read fic like these I feel so proud that our fandom/ship is filled with people who knows the quality of writing something as brilliant as this! your work was recommended by a friend and I am glad she did! :)
Good luck with your future projects and hope to hear from you soon! :)

Lyimee

WOW! that was just...omg... i seriously have no words. this is the kind that sticks to the memory because it makes the honest kind of feelings. while reading, i can't help but notice the similarities of this fanfic to the novel Perks of Being A Wallflower. this is the part where my mind was blown. the tone is so similar that it's almost like they're the same person (Draco and Charlie). like a grown up Charlie. thanks, btw, for sharing.

Amazing story!

But too much cursing on Hermione's part. But this is your story, and I just enjoy reading it.

And I think I know how it end... Just so you know. ;)

Hey! I gotta say, your story's great! It's confusing though but I like the way you interpret it. It's almost as if I'm Draco in the story. Thank you so much for this story! I really enjoyed it. :)

Wow. Just...wow.

Fantastic. You're absolutely fantastic. You strengthened, justified, the reasons why I love to read angst. Your way with words, vulgar or subtle, and how you convey all these emotions in them. How you matured the two amazes me, because the personalities of the original Draco and Hermione were still there. This story is refreshing, and yet I feel like an anvil's just been dropped in my stomach. It's also refreshing to see someone like you here, on fanfiction, where trolls and beginner writers are the majority. You are a very talented writer to have made me feel so many things during a one-shot.

I'd like to say that you've reignited my dying flame for Dramione.

Again, this was a fabulous story.

Wow. I loved how you somehow managed to tie the stories together and show different parallels.

However, I would be lying if I said I am not at least somewhat confused by the ending. I very much believe that everything up to Draco going back into a different bar actually happened.

This was very touching. Even though it was sort of AU, it seemed fitting of their original character. Although this was a sort of sad story I also found it quite humorous at parts.

I especially love how you used the theme of snow throughout the story. "The curtains are drawn closed, but I can hear the snow outside. If you'd ever heard snow, it kind of sings sometimes. It's really quiet, though. You really have to listen and have nothing on your mind. And it's hard for a lot of people, because usually they're always thinking.""But after a minute or two I turn my head back, and I close my eyes. I try to focus on the sound of the snow, but it never comes.""And afterwards we just sit there, and I suddenly feel her hand holding mine. And I swear I think she heard the snow for the first time."

What a welcome contrast to some of the mindless stories on here..

In any case, I loved the story and I wish you the best in your future as a writer.

Wow.

This story is so raw it amazes me. I don't think I've read anything else before in this style and at first I wasn't sure I would like it. But by the time I got to the end I found myself clicking on the review button because I think it's just that great. The way you capture the desperation Draco feels through the style of writing is inspiring and I love the circular nature of the tale. Even though the plot itself was pretty simple, this story left me feeling moved on a more profound level. This is a wonderful piece of writing and I truly appreciate being able to read it. Thank you.

whew...dude that was amazing, totally epic. original, creative, hella heavy and just wow. best fanfiction ever, even though its barely fanfiction at all - give the characters different names nd the only thing that changes is their history and what we know about their personalities...all around clever.

i love plot twists...good ones anyway, lol. i guess all i got left to say is that ur pretty legit. wish there were more like you around, then i wouldn't waste time sorting through repetitive juvenile junk (cringe).

no offense to those who write and/or enjoy said junk.

anyway, great job nd i'll be looking out for more ;]