Hrm, this was really good. :D i thought it was funny when Theif King Bakura was examining Ryou's clothing, and how he was all fascinated with the shoes. It was a bit confusing somewhat in the middle, but overall I liked it! Good job!

Aha, this is so awesome! It took me a rereading to understand it, but the plot is wonderfully original and creative. TK Bakura's character is wonderful here- how he's written so simple but twisted. There were a few sentences in here that could have been worded better, but other than that it was really well written and flowed well. :D ~

wow, that was awesome. I wish you had written more, now that it's over. You know you should write a " What would happen if Ryou was put in the final game and meet Akefia" fic and it should so be a TKB and R story. That would be awesome. I'd write something like that myself but I suck at writing fics. well I like your one shot and hope you write more soon.

Quite an interesting story you've got here. You kind of did a confussing skip at the end though and i had to reread to get the fact that it was Ryou talking this time. Apart from that, i liked it.