Aw!! Awesome story! I like it cause it is different then the other after Dalek tags. And ties everything together nicely.

We need more stories with Adam torture :-D

I haven't seen much of the new Dr. Who (liked what I did see) but it seems to me you've done a great job capturing the characters. Well-written!

Great missing scene, very well written. Loved the ending made me smile well done =)

That was excellent! I love it! you have Rose & the Doctor's relationship down pat! I loved it!