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Reviews For: Go West, Young Man - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

soswimmer13
2007-08-22
ch 7,
abusedue to the kids convo, i so see lindsay pregnant, with two kids already, and having triplets. technically she would have only been pregnant three times, and danny would get his five kids!!
JennCorinthos
2007-07-28
ch 11,
abuseI absolutely loved this... Great, Great writing...

JENNIFER
oddie33325
2007-05-02
ch 11,
abuseI loved it !
chili-peppers
2007-04-16
ch 11,
abuseAww!This fic is amazing! I've loved reading it. Perfect ending! so beautiful. great work!
prplerayne
2007-04-16
ch 11,
abuseBravo!! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story very much! I'm sad to see it come to an end, but can't wait to see what you have planned for your next story! Yes, this was a fluffy piece, a very nice bit of fluff! I can't wait to see your angst chops next!

BTW, I thought you said you couldn't write smut? What you wrote in this chapter seemed to fit the story perfectly here! It seems to me, that's what you did, you listened to the story and followed the natural flow of things!

IMO, as a writer, that's an important skill to master! Keep up the good work!
Kaoli water goddess
2007-04-16
ch 11,
abuseDanny's pretty possessive isn't he? At least Linsay knows that it's because he loves her. And Kaoli loved the romance!! It twas good and very fluffy!!
iheartCSI4326
2007-04-16
ch 11,
abuseOkay. I will outright beg for your forgiveness for my lack of reviews during this absolutely beautifully written piece of D/L fanfiction. I've been having my inner-problems with my own writing. But that's another subject. Heehee.

I enjoyed this so much, no words really do much justice to describe how it made me Aww, smile, laugh... nearly cry (I never really knew a wedding could do such a thing to me!)... and all in all it made me happy as a D/L shipper. You really are a great writer. And I just have to say that I am so glad you came onto FanFictionnet and let us read what your talented D/L imagination has come up with. It's always so exciting when there are more of those great fics/writers for both D/L and CSI:NY in general.

You have among lots of things, a talent for characterization... and I never find myself feeling like a line in out of character... and side-note.. I love that there was no Peyton, I'm not a mean person.. but I do have a dislike for her. My heart belongs to Stella & Mac.. (After D/L of course).. so yet another thing that I had to grin like an idiot for. All in all.. this fic just made me feel how much D/L is both an amazing pairing, but also how much I love them together.

Now... I'm going to be less serious now. lol. And may I just say... hmm... You rock! *giggle* There that kinda sums it all up for me really. There we go. Ahaha.

I may be the worst reviewer sometimes. But I will always be reading.. and enjoying your fics. Keep it up, you couldn't go wrong even if you tried. :P

x India Lila.

Oh yes. Ps, ahah. I see that there is a slight chance of a more 'romance' with our favorite couple. Ahem. Well... let me just add to my suddenly overly long review here... that... I give a little squee for such a development: * SQUEE *

And now. I leave. Before I bore the whole population of fanfictionnet. Take care. And hugs.

* waves madly *
PintSizeGenius
2007-04-16
ch 11,
abuseAw so sweet! I loved it! I would give you some criticism, but i can't think of any. Never been very good at that. Hope you keep it up!

PSG x
serenity2bliss
2007-04-16
ch 11,
abuseLol! Absolutely loved it! There are so many parts that I like, it's hard to start ;) Loved the gala scene and Danny's line to Flack about his date and his remark about Mac asking Lindsay to dance =)

Hope you already get started with your new fic ;) Good luck with that one!
The Little Corinthian
2007-04-15
ch 11,
abuse*cheers* Good ending! :0P Eh, the best place for a sexy man's tie is always on the floor. Especially when it's Danny's. And I thought the dress sounded pretty. And very similar to one I wore to an awards night, actually. If Lindsay's was anything like mine, invisible tape is her best friend, too :0P Very nice job, I've enjoyed this fic a lot!! Looking forward to more of your work!!
Ninde Ancalime
2007-04-15
ch 11,
abuseAre you really going to write an angst next? why? I like this wonderfully fluffy story, I mean, it had some angst. You should right a partially angsty but still wonderfully fluffy sequel... because I think that dress did help bring about little Danny's and Montanas, if you get what I'm saying. Lol. This was a wonderful story, and I'm happy to have read it.
5t4c3y
2007-04-09
ch 10,
abuselol. Loved the ending there, and the rest. You're a great author
The Little Corinthian
2007-04-09
ch 10,
abuseOh, poor Jen. So confused. :0P I love it! Very nice job, is there perhaps more...?
Kaoli water goddess
2007-04-09
ch 10,
abuseThat was a dirty trick there on Angell, but it was SOO dang funny!! Can you squeeze ONE chapter of DL romance for me here? HUh? Pretty please? =3
JessicaDelko
2007-04-08
ch 10,
abuseexcellent chap as always! keep it up, i have to know more!
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