Poor Buri, nice fic though.

this is really sweet and sad!

Lovely, and perfectly in character. You capture the essence of two characters who aren't well explored in canon very well.

This is beautiful. I can't believe I never thought much about the Buri/Thayet relashionship and all the possiblities... (maybe because I was 12?...I don't know...)Anayways, I love this, and the way you perfectly captured the lazy/sultry mood without ever mentioning the words or any synonyms.

This was really nice, I liked it a lot. Makes a lot of sense, good job. Just one thing, would she really call him the "Northern" prince? That doesn't really make sense to me. I thought thats just what the Bazhir called him. Good job and keep up the good work!

this was pretty good and actually believable... I liked it.. good job

Very, very sad and angsty. Poor Buri - I just hope Raoul's making her happy. What's a moon maiden? And...perfumed underwear?

It was all the fault of stupid Jonathan of Conté and his stupid charm and stupid crown.

Wait till Jon hears that.

In time this hurt would become another hard, cold knot near her heart, like Mother and Pathom, to be left alone and not thought upon. In time.

Very, very graphic and sad sentence.