Um ok...
Slightly annoying ending...
I don't know how to improve it...
But it certainly wasn't bad!
Verdict: 7/10

It's a good lil ficlet. :)

This was great! :) You should do one when he finds out who destroyed the Death Star. ;) His son, Luke Skywalker.

QN :)

Good grief, why would anyone not like this? I loved it! Very easy to picture Vader having a sudden "memory attack" like this, especially in the early days. I liked how it seemed to speed up at the end too. That really conveyed the intensification of the memories.