Poor JR, I felt bad for him in this chapter. I'm glad that Cally's secret is out in the open now.

Excellent job. I love the moment of honesty from JR. Too bad we couldn't have seen more of that side to him on the show. The dancing scene was just awesome!

Great chapter. You've got a real hang of JR's emotions. Really loving this story!

Fabulous story, I hope you continue with this!

good chapter & more please

I love the updates! It is still an amazing story! I can't wait for more. :)

You know how much I loved this story, but I thought I would say it here again. This chapter was very good, diving into the emotions and insecurities of J.R. and Sue Ellen. No matter what happens, those two know that they belong together.

Yet another wonderful update. Glad to see J.R. standing up for what’s right and making a clean start with Sue Ellen and John Ross.

I already told you how much I loved your update, but I'll say it again. It was fantastic. Don didn't turn out to be a jerk at all; he really cared about Sue Ellen. I hope she finds happiness with J.R. soon, but Cally may be a problem...

I know I already gave a review when you posted this on the other site but thought I'd leave another comment here as well since it's such a wonderful story.

Sue Ellen was such a well-developed character at this point so it was a waste to see the way she disintegrated in her final season and into what I perceive as a shame to one of Dallas’ most intriguing and complex female character ever created. Her experience with JR should have taught her to come full circle and move on instead of becoming consumed with obsession and revenge; in the end that appeared to have hindered her more than it did JR. You, however, give us a fantastic description of what could have been, and as you have written it so eloquently, she has matured into the wiser and stronger woman who has learned to recognize her faults and immaturities from being so dependent and indecisive. A great way to show yet another side of Sue Ellen.

I’m very interested in seeing what happens next, what she will say to JR, and how he will handle this situation with Cally. As I’ve said, I’m quite certain the little country bumpkin won’t take it too well! :)

Whoops wrong story I reveiwed this one is okay it's the other wind one that is crap

After having finished this entire story now I feel it's not half as good as the other stuff on here...in fact most of it is just pure violence

Excellent story, can't wait to see Cally's reaction when J.R. lets her go.

Your latest (and long awaited) update blew me away. Very well done! :-D

Utterly fantastic updates, GS! I look forward to seeing our fab duo making strides in their relationship. I wonder how the family will react to their gradual progression...especially a certain southern girl who might need a little extra dosage of what the *real* Mrs. Ewing is all about! :D