Wow. Your story is not like anything I expected or have read before; not that that is a bad thing, quite the opposite. Bella is so eerie it makes her lifelessness seem beautiful. Telling the story from the view of an empath makes Bella's emotionless state that much more sharp and poingant.
Please keep writing, you are doing a wonderful job and update soon!

This is Deep!! I am absolutely amazed!! I usually don't like story's with other characters, but this one is really good!! Please update soon!!

this is from tegan since hope already reviewed chapter 2(just because it's her account!loljk) i have to write my review for chapter 2 here instead...*start*how can your stories be so freakishly amazing, it must be impossible, maybe you're a magical perfect figment of my imagination, that must be it*end*

omg so i actually remembered the password for fanfiction. it was touch and go for a sec there. i very much enjoyed this story. i didn't really like it before just because i didn't understand anything and i had forgotten so much but even though i still thought that i didn't really like it i found myself thinking about it and i realized that i really do enjoy it...without me knowing i did...it just happened...scary. so yep. i am looking forward to more! *hugs and kisses*

Poor Bella. God Damn Edward fir leaving.

This is interesting... Is this a Edward/Bella story?

By the way, this is Victoria/Eleganza-Bella on LJ. :)

please update soon, this story is too good. I can't want to read chapter 3. please update.

More please

More Please!