How's Kohaku draw that conclusion? Confusing...

Oh, and Miroku's comment of 'I'll help you research that later Sango'; OMG... I was laughing so damn hard!!

*gasp*

Okay, two really good chapters! I like the way you used Shippo to transition us first from Miroku/Sango to Sango/Kohaku, and then trotted in on Kagome/Inuyasha. It had a very natural feel to it, because, after all, that's the type of thing Shippo does.

(I can't help laughing every time I think of Shippo growing up in a pseudo-commune! But that has nothing to do with this story.)

Anyhoo, you left me with a *GASP* at the end of this chapter. Zomg, talk about MELT.

And I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop. Update again soon, please!

~ DW

Getting naughty are we...hehe.

eh.. i thought this was a San/Mir fic not Kag/Inu but it was still good update soon ^_^

~MirChan

no not another chapter to wait for! i love love love love love ur story!XD!its so oh mega kewl!

No Miroku and Sango here... I'm depressed.

poor Kohaku... all worried about losing Sango to Miroku. She will lvoe both of them with all her heart. Kohaku's her family, while MIroku is her lover basically.

Pretty good story so far! Please keep up with the updates!

very good update soon ^_^

~MirChan

If you keep writing good stuff like this, I never WILL have to watch Inuyasha... I'll just come read your stories! ^__^ Very very nice, duo! You paint a very lovely picture with your words. You know I don't know much about Inuyasha, but I would guess that you have written the script for the scene EVERY Inu fan would kill to see! heehee! Let me know when you have the next installment done!

AW!

Been a while since I've watched IY, and I've never finished it. However, it has been one of my favorites, so I thought I'd check this out!

Yep, definitely had one of those "aw" moments. So I'd like to see more. But you know, the title worries me! *grin*

As far as technical work goes, I'm amazed at how well you've captured each of the characters's voices. Yay! That makes for good reading IMO, and a quick dive-in to the world. Not many fanfic authors can actually do that.

There is one thing that caught my eye, though, and it's a nitpick. I just have to point it out! [Sango slowly pulled herself out of the rumble and answered,] . . . I think you mean, [rubble].

Let us Betarians know when you update, k?

And good luck! (says the girl who hasn't yet finished a full novel)

~ DW

Big 'aww' and yay'!! I can't wait to see what else happens!! Update soon!

i like this story, update soon... ^_^

~MirChan